Bug 746862 - Cleaning up the grammar in Introduction
Summary: Cleaning up the grammar in Introduction
Keywords:
Status: CLOSED EOL
Alias: None
Product: Fedora Documentation
Classification: Fedora
Component: amateur-radio-guide
Version: devel
Hardware: Unspecified
OS: Unspecified
unspecified
low
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: Petr Bokoc
QA Contact: Fedora Docs QA
URL:
Whiteboard:
Depends On:
Blocks:
TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2011-10-18 02:25 UTC by James Weirick
Modified: 2021-10-22 04:13 UTC (History)
3 users (show)

Fixed In Version:
Doc Type: Bug Fix
Doc Text:
Clone Of:
Environment:
Last Closed: 2019-11-07 15:29:57 UTC


Attachments (Terms of Use)
Fixed Grammer (1.43 KB, patch)
2013-02-28 14:01 UTC, Navneet Singh
navneetsingh0693: review+
Details | Diff

Description James Weirick 2011-10-18 02:25:14 UTC
Description of problem:
The introduction has several grammatical problems which might cause confusion to readers.

Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable):


How reproducible:
Always

Steps to Reproduce:
1. Read section "1. Introduction"
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Actual results:
Amateur radio and Linux go hand-in-hand. Both allow users to experiment to the extent of their knowledge and to learn more along the way. With new digital technologies being used everyday open source software is the best way to stay cutting e dge in this ever-changing hobby.

Fedora has packaged dozens of software to make it easy for Fedora users to obtain and setup. Within seconds any user w ill be able to have the tools they to enhance their amateur radio experience. 

Expected results:
Amateur radio and Linux go hand-in-hand. Both allow users to experiment to the extent of their knowledge and to learn more along the way. With new digital technologies being used everyday, open source software is the best way to stay cutting edge in this ever-changing hobby.

Fedora has packaged dozens of programs to make it easy for Fedora users to obtain and setup. Within minutes, any user will be able to have the tools they need to enhance their amateur radio experience. 

Additional info:

Comment 1 Karsten Wade 2011-12-14 03:45:36 UTC
Removing myself for these bug components as I'm either no longer involved in that aspect of the project, or no longer care to watch this particular bug. Sorry if you are caught in a maelstrom of bug changes as a result!

Comment 2 Navneet Singh 2013-02-28 14:00:46 UTC
Hi,

I have identfied the error in Amateur_Radio_Guide.xml and edited the file.

Thanks,
Navneet Singh

Comment 3 Navneet Singh 2013-02-28 14:01:48 UTC
Created attachment 703902 [details]
Fixed Grammer

Comment 4 Petr Bokoc 2019-11-07 15:29:57 UTC
I'm closing this bug as part of a Bugzilla cleanup effort. The most likely reason is that the bug has been opened either against a component we no longer publish, or against Release Notes for an EOL release.


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