Description of problem:

The word "and" shouldn't appear at the end of the paragraph, please remove it.
Fields marked with an asterisk (******) are mistake.

1. On page:
http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6-Beta/html/Hypervisor_Deployment_Guide/sect-Deployment_Guide-Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization_Hypervisor_interactive_installation-Configuration-Status.html


      the hostname,

      the current status of the network connection,

      the destination(s) of logs and reports, ******and******

      the number of active virtual machines. 

2. On page:
http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6-Beta/html/Hypervisor_Deployment_Guide/sect-Deployment_Guide-Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization_Hypervisor_interactive_installation-Configuration-Network.html
   1)
      the Hypervisor's hostname,

      the DNS server(s) to use,

      the NTP server(s) to use, ******and******

      the network interface to use. 


   2)
Procedure 5.4. Network Interface Configuration
For each network interface detected the Hypervisor will display the:


      Device,

      Status,

      Model, ******and******

      MAC Address. 

   3)
Device Identification
Select the network interface to be configured from the list and press Enter.
In some cases it may be unclear which physical device an entry in the list refers to. Where this is the case the Hypervisor is able to blink the physical device's network traffic lights to assist with identification. To make use of this facility select the entry from the list ******and******, then select the <Flash Lights to Identify> button. Press Enter ******and******, take note of which physical device's lights start blinking. The configuration screen for the selected device will be displayed. 

   4)
In particular it is necessary that:

      the IP Address is not already in use on the network,

      the Netmask matches that used by other machines on the network, ******and******

      the Gateway matches that used by other machines on the network. 


3. On page:
http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6-Beta/html/Hypervisor_Deployment_Guide/sect-Deployment_Guide-Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization_Hypervisor_interactive_installation-Configuration-Remote_Storage.html

The IQN is made up of the following elements, separated by the . character:


      the literal string iqn,

      the date that the naming authority took control of the domain in yyyy-mm format,

      the reversed domain name - demo.redhat.com becomes com.redhat.demo, ******and******

      optionally, a storage target name as specified by the naming authority - preceded by a colon. 


4. On page:
http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6-Beta/html/Hypervisor_Deployment_Guide/sect-Deployment_Guide-Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization_Hypervisor_interactive_installation-Configuration-RHN.html

HTTP Proxy
Where a HTTP proxy is in use the details to connect to it must be provided. To connect to the Red Hat Network or a Satellite server via a proxy you must enter:


      the proxy Server's network address,

      the Port to connect to the proxy on, ******and******

      optionally, the Username and Password to use to connect to the proxy.