Bug 772636 - serial comma missing before the word "and"
Summary: serial comma missing before the word "and"
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Status: CLOSED NEXTRELEASE
Alias: None
Product: Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6
Classification: Red Hat
Component: doc-Virtualization_Getting_Started_Guide
Version: 6.1
Hardware: Unspecified
OS: Unspecified
unspecified
unspecified
Target Milestone: rc
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Assignee: Laura Novich
QA Contact: ecs-bugs
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Blocks:
TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2012-01-09 13:40 UTC by Laura Novich
Modified: 2016-01-27 01:54 UTC (History)
2 users (show)

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Doc Type: Bug Fix
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Last Closed: 2012-03-07 04:30:29 UTC
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Description Laura Novich 2012-01-09 13:40:25 UTC
Description of problem:
When items are written in a series, a comma needs to be added after the word "and".

on page 10....

• A common, generic,(add comma) and stable layer to securely manage virtualized guests on a host.
• A common interface for managing local systems, (add comma) and networked hosts.
• All of the APIs required to provision, create, modify, monitor, control, migrate, (add comma) and stop virtualized guests if the hypervisor supports these operations. Although multiple hosts may be accessed with
libvirt simultaneously, the APIs are limited to single node operations.

Comment 2 Laura Novich 2012-01-09 13:44:37 UTC
Also on page 11 - same issue. 
Proposed fix -
 It can be used to perform virtualization administration, virtualized guest creation, migration, (add comma) and configuration tasks and allows
access to graphical guest consoles.

Comment 3 Laura Novich 2012-01-09 14:07:58 UTC
page 19 - same issue or maybe not, depending on the context create, pause, and shut down domains should be the correction.

Comment 5 Laura Novich 2012-01-16 10:38:34 UTC
• A common interface for managing local systems, (add comma) and networked
hosts.
On a second read this is not needed

Comment 6 Laura Novich 2012-02-02 08:38:13 UTC
fixed as described


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