Red Hat Bugzilla – Bug 809159
[PATCHES] F17 release notes proofreading
Last modified: 2012-05-14 08:51:39 EDT
Created attachment 574546 [details]
make firewalld less developer-centric, proofread and add
The firewalld section looks like a direct copy from the feature page and contains stuff about comps, etc. that really isn't useful to end users. It also contains outdated test instructions that are pretty useless now that firewalld is default.
The attached patch cleans it up a bit, proofreading where necessary and converting the "testing" section to some examples of how to control firewalld from the command line, with examples on how to work directly with port numbers added (I think that's a fairly common task).
*** Bug 809163 has been marked as a duplicate of this bug. ***
Created attachment 574552 [details]
proofreading and minor improvements to the KDE section
Just some minor improvements to the KDE section, including marking up
application names with DocBook consistently.
Created attachment 574553 [details]
Productivity section proofreading
Just some minor nits in the Productivity section, including consistent capitalization in the vym features list.
Created attachment 574554 [details]
Development Tools minor typo fixes
Created attachment 574556 [details]
Amateur Radio typo fixes
Looks like that's it. :-)
I know you guys are running pretty close to a deadline so I put these up such that you can `git pull git://github.com/tchollingsworth/fedora_release_notes.git f17` if you don't want to mess around with applying all these patches manually.
Thanks for the help.
corrected in 17.0.0 and later