Red Hat Bugzilla – Bug 995846
[Install] "presently" used where "currently" intended
Last modified: 2014-04-06 23:08:53 EDT
Description of problem: In Section 1.6. Supported Virtual Machine Operating Systems, this sentence appears: Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization presently supports the virtualization of these guest operating systems: The word "presently" means "anon" or "in a little while". It doesn't mean "currently", which is what was intended here. This is a tiny little bug, almost not worth raising, but I'll forget to make the change if I don't raise it. Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable): 3.2 Actual results: Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization presently supports the virtualization of these guest operating systems: Expected results: Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization supports the virtualization of these guest operating systems: Additional info: As I think about it more, I doubt that we need the adverb "currently". The currency of the document is established already by the version number on the title page. As I said above, tiny little bug.
Documentation Link ------------------ http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization/3.3/html-single/Installation_Guide/index.html#Supported_virtual_machines NVR --- Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization-Installation_Guide-3.3-en-US-3.3-9 What Changed ------------ Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization presently supports the virtualization of these guest operating systems: Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization supports the virtualization of these guest operating systems: Updated Revision History [21134]. Moving to POST.
Documentation Link ------------------ http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization/3.3/html-single/Installation_Guide/index.html#Supported_virtual_machines NVR --- Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization-Installation_Guide-3.3-en-US-3.3-9 What Changed ------------ I changed Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization presently supports the virtualization of these guest operating systems: To this Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization supports the virtualization of these guest operating systems: Updated Revision History [21134]. Moving to POST.
Documentation Link ------------------------------ http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization/3.3/html-single/Installation_Guide/index.html#Supported_virtual_machines What Changed ------------------------------ Original sentence: Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization presently supports the virtualization of these guest operating systems: New sentence: Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization supports the virtualization of these guest operating systems: [ 8301-502335 ] NVR ------------------------------ Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization-Installation_Guide-3.3-en-US-3.3-9 Updated Revision History [21134-502336]. Moving to ON_QA.