Bug 1011103

Summary:	Text contains first person references
Product:	Red Hat Enterprise MRG	Reporter:	Ken Giusti <kgiusti>
Component:	Messaging_Programming_Reference	Assignee:	Jared MORGAN <jmorgan>
Status:	CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE	QA Contact:	Eric Sammons <esammons>
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Version:	3.0	CC:	esammons, mmurray, zkraus
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Description Ken Giusti 2013-09-23 15:49:43 UTC

Title: AMQP 1.0 support in MRG-M 3

Describe the issue:

At several points in this section, the narrative is in the first person.  E.g.:

"However, I have defined a special extension capability" ...

"... implementation, I'm eager to here of use cases ... "


Suggestions for improvement:

These should be re-worded to remove the personal narrative.

Additional information:

Comment 1 Joshua Wulf 2013-11-19 05:10:32 UTC

Fixed:

http://docbuilder.usersys.redhat.com/19948/#AMQP_1.0_support_in_MRG-M_3