Bug 1011103 - Text contains first person references
Summary: Text contains first person references
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Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE
Alias: None
Product: Red Hat Enterprise MRG
Classification: Red Hat
Component: Messaging_Programming_Reference
Version: 3.0
Hardware: Unspecified
OS: Unspecified
unspecified
low
Target Milestone: 3.0
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Assignee: Jared MORGAN
QA Contact: Eric Sammons
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Blocks:
TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2013-09-23 15:49 UTC by Ken Giusti
Modified: 2015-08-10 01:23 UTC (History)
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Build Name: 19948, Messaging Programming Reference-3-0 Build Date: 23-09-2013 18:27:35 Topic ID: 19949-470201 [Latest]
Last Closed: 2015-01-22 15:27:15 UTC
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Description Ken Giusti 2013-09-23 15:49:43 UTC 
Title: AMQP 1.0 support in MRG-M 3

Describe the issue:

At several points in this section, the narrative is in the first person.  E.g.:

"However, I have defined a special extension capability" ...

"... implementation, I'm eager to here of use cases ... "


Suggestions for improvement:

These should be re-worded to remove the personal narrative.

Additional information:
Comment 1 Joshua Wulf 2013-11-19 05:10:32 UTC 
Fixed:

http://docbuilder.usersys.redhat.com/19948/#AMQP_1.0_support_in_MRG-M_3
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