Red Hat Bugzilla – Bug 1011103
Text contains first person references
Last modified: 2015-08-09 21:23:33 EDT
Title: AMQP 1.0 support in MRG-M 3
Describe the issue:
At several points in this section, the narrative is in the first person. E.g.:
"However, I have defined a special extension capability" ...
"... implementation, I'm eager to here of use cases ... "
Suggestions for improvement:
These should be re-worded to remove the personal narrative.