Bug 1090715

Summary: [Docs] [Change] [Install] The description of how to update the guest tools must be updated
Product: Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization Manager Reporter: Andrew Dahms <adahms>
Component: DocumentationAssignee: Andrew Dahms <adahms>
Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE QA Contact: Lucy Bopf <lbopf>
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Version: 3.4.0CC: acathrow, gklein, juwu, yeylon
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Description Andrew Dahms 2014-04-24 02:49:49 UTC
The description of how to update the guest tools must be standardized and updated to remove issues such as one count of 'you've' and to add correct tagging.

Comment 1 Andrew Dahms 2014-04-29 03:50:41 UTC
Documentation Link
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http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/site/documentation/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization/3.4/html-single/Installation_Guide/index.html#Updating_the_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization_Guest_Tools

What Changed
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The following topic was revised to change 'you've' to 'you have', remove Step 4. and streamline the overall procedure to match other procedures and improve clarity.

Updating the Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization Guest Tools [13602-633413]

Updated revision history: [30105-633451]

NVR
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Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization-Installation_Guide-3.4-en-US-3.4-18

Moving to ON_QA.

Comment 2 Lucy Bopf 2014-08-01 00:50:12 UTC
Peer reviewed.

Instance of 'you've' has been removed. Procedure reads well, is clear, and adheres to the style of other procedures in the guides. This change is live in the docs.

VERIFIED.