Bug 1090715 - [Docs] [Change] [Install] The description of how to update the guest tools must be updated
Summary: [Docs] [Change] [Install] The description of how to update the guest tools mu...
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Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE
Alias: None
Product: Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization Manager
Classification: Red Hat
Component: Documentation
Version: 3.4.0
Hardware: Unspecified
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Assignee: Andrew Dahms
QA Contact: Lucy Bopf
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TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2014-04-24 02:49 UTC by Andrew Dahms
Modified: 2014-08-01 00:50 UTC (History)
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Last Closed: 2014-08-01 00:50:12 UTC
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Description Andrew Dahms 2014-04-24 02:49:49 UTC
The description of how to update the guest tools must be standardized and updated to remove issues such as one count of 'you've' and to add correct tagging.

Comment 1 Andrew Dahms 2014-04-29 03:50:41 UTC
Documentation Link
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http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/site/documentation/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization/3.4/html-single/Installation_Guide/index.html#Updating_the_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization_Guest_Tools

What Changed
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The following topic was revised to change 'you've' to 'you have', remove Step 4. and streamline the overall procedure to match other procedures and improve clarity.

Updating the Red Hat Enterprise Virtualization Guest Tools [13602-633413]

Updated revision history: [30105-633451]

NVR
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Red_Hat_Enterprise_Virtualization-Installation_Guide-3.4-en-US-3.4-18

Moving to ON_QA.

Comment 2 Lucy Bopf 2014-08-01 00:50:12 UTC
Peer reviewed.

Instance of 'you've' has been removed. Procedure reads well, is clear, and adheres to the style of other procedures in the guides. This change is live in the docs.

VERIFIED.


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