Bug 1140703

Summary:	Create Network dialogue has a typo and awkward wording
Product:	Red Hat OpenStack	Reporter:	Jeff Needle <jneedle>
Component:	python-django-horizon	Assignee:	Angus Thomas <athomas>
Status:	CLOSED ERRATA	QA Contact:	Ido Ovadia <iovadia>
Severity:	unspecified	Docs Contact:
Priority:	unspecified
Version:	5.0 (RHEL 6)	CC:	aortega, athomas, bthurber, jneedle, mreid, mrunge, sclark, yeylon
Target Milestone:	ga	Keywords:	Triaged
Target Release:	7.0 (Kilo)
Hardware:	Unspecified
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Fixed In Version:	python-django-horizon-2015.1.0-7.el7ost	Doc Type:	Bug Fix
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Last Closed:	2015-08-05 13:13:43 UTC	Type:	Bug
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Description Jeff Needle 2014-09-11 14:01:33 UTC

Typo on Create Network dialog, first step. "From here you can create a new network. In addition a subnet associated with the network can be created in the next panel." Needs to be a comma after "In addition".  Also, the first sentence is awkwardly worded.

Comment 2 Julie Pichon 2014-09-17 03:31:26 UTC

In 6.0 the string has been replaced with:

"Create a new network. In addition a subnet associated with the network can be created in the next panel."

Does the wording seem less awkward to you that way? If not, could you provide a a less awkward suggestion and open the bug upstream at https://bugs.launchpad.net/horizon together with the suggestion?

Note that String Freeze currently applies upstream for Juno (to be 6.0) so it's unlikely we'll be able to disrupt the translator's work for just a comma, although improved descriptions are still welcome at this stage. Thank you.

Comment 3 Julie Pichon 2014-10-15 09:14:02 UTC

Translation changes for a comma will not be making it into 6.0 at this point, we'll fix it in the next release.

Comment 4 Julie Pichon 2015-02-12 13:19:23 UTC

Fixed merged in Kilo upstream.

Comment 8 Ido Ovadia 2015-06-29 09:08:09 UTC

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python-django-horizon-2015.1.0-10.el7ost.noarch

Comment 10 errata-xmlrpc 2015-08-05 13:13:43 UTC

Since the problem described in this bug report should be
resolved in a recent advisory, it has been closed with a
resolution of ERRATA.

For information on the advisory, and where to find the updated
files, follow the link below.

If the solution does not work for you, open a new bug report.

https://access.redhat.com/errata/RHEA-2015:1548

Comment 11 Jeff Needle 2018-07-23 13:09:44 UTC

Cancelling NEEDINFO on me since this bug is closed.