Bug 449712

Summary: Typos
Product: Red Hat Enterprise Linux 5 Reporter: Michael Hideo <mhideo>
Component: doc-Virtualization_GuideAssignee: Christopher Curran <ccurran>
Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE QA Contact: Don Domingo <ddomingo>
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Priority: low    
Version: 5.2Keywords: Documentation
Target Milestone: rc   
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Hardware: All   
OS: Linux   
URL: http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Interpreting_Error_Messages.html
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Fixed In Version: 5.2 Doc Type: Bug Fix
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Description Michael Hideo 2008-06-03 02:04:54 UTC
Typos:

 

http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-System_requirements.html

 

s/Fiber Channel/Fibre Channel/

 

http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Virtualization_limitations.html

 

s/(see(see Chapter 13/(see Chapter 13/

 

Also in the last sentence in the “note”

s/presen/present/

 

http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_packages_on_the_host-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_during_a_new_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_installation.html

 

s/manaully/manually/

 

http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_packages_on_the_host-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_on_an_existing_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_system.html

 

s/install/install/

 

http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_guests-Create_a_guest_using_virt_manager.html

 

in paragraph 8.

s/installtion/installation/

 

http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Guest_operating_system_installation_processes-Installing_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_5_as_a_para_virtualized_guest.html

 

The sentence “After your guest has completed it is initial bootstrap …” should
be “After your guest has completed its initial bootstrap …” i.e “its” instead of
“it is”

 

http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_guests-Create_a_guest_using_virt_install.html

 

    virt-install output should be properly aligned; that

    would make the sample output a lot easier to read

 

 

http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_block_devices-Configuring_persistent_storage_in_a_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_5_environments.html

 

Title has inconsistency “in a Red Hat….environments” word “environment should be
singular

 

s/4 device/4 devices/

 

 

http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Virtualized_network_devices.html

 

In “Those chapters provide a details description…”

s/details/detailed

 

in Note s/Chapter. Chapter 13/Chapter 13/

 

http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_network_devices-Laptop_network_configuration.html

 

s/ it has access the same interface all the time/ it has access to the same
interface all the time/

s/ the procedure outline below / the procedure outlined below

s/ allow the the guests/allow the guests/

s/configuration to suite your local/configuration to suit your local/

 

 

 

http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_xend.html

 

    s/dom0 cpus/dom0-cpus/

 

http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_CPUs.html

 

s/its typically better/it’s typically better/

 

 

http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_Virtual_Machine_Managervirt_manager.html

 

s/with shell privilages on the host/with shell privileges on the host/

 

 

http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Interpreting_Error_Messages.html

 

s/xm create –c va base/ xm create –c va-base/

 

s/depreciation/deprecation/

Comment 1 Michael Hideo 2008-06-03 04:18:07 UTC
[mhideo@mhideo en-US]$ svn ci -m"BZ#449712"
Sending        en-US/Block_Devices.xml
Sending        en-US/Concept_Managing_CPUs.xml
Sending        en-US/Network_Devices.xml
Sending        en-US/System_Requirements.xml
Sending        en-US/Task_Installation_Guest.xml
Sending        en-US/Task_Installation_Guest_2.xml
Sending        en-US/Task_Troubleshooting.xml
Sending        en-US/Task_xend.xml
Sending        en-US/Virtualization_Limitations.xml
Sending        en-US/Virtualization_Live_Migration.xml
Transmitting file data ..........
Committed revision 6821.

Comment 2 Christopher Curran 2008-07-22 06:50:25 UTC
All are fixed in the present release