Typos: http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-System_requirements.html s/Fiber Channel/Fibre Channel/ http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Virtualization_limitations.html s/(see(see Chapter 13/(see Chapter 13/ Also in the last sentence in the “note” s/presen/present/ http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_packages_on_the_host-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_during_a_new_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_installation.html s/manaully/manually/ http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_packages_on_the_host-Installing_Red_Hat_Virtualization_on_an_existing_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_system.html s/install/install/ http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_guests-Create_a_guest_using_virt_manager.html in paragraph 8. s/installtion/installation/ http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Guest_operating_system_installation_processes-Installing_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_5_as_a_para_virtualized_guest.html The sentence “After your guest has completed it is initial bootstrap …” should be “After your guest has completed its initial bootstrap …” i.e “its” instead of “it is” http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Installing_guests-Create_a_guest_using_virt_install.html virt-install output should be properly aligned; that would make the sample output a lot easier to read http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_block_devices-Configuring_persistent_storage_in_a_Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_5_environments.html Title has inconsistency “in a Red Hat….environments” word “environment should be singular s/4 device/4 devices/ http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Virtualized_network_devices.html In “Those chapters provide a details description…” s/details/detailed in Note s/Chapter. Chapter 13/Chapter 13/ http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_network_devices-Laptop_network_configuration.html s/ it has access the same interface all the time/ it has access to the same interface all the time/ s/ the procedure outline below / the procedure outlined below s/ allow the the guests/allow the guests/ s/configuration to suite your local/configuration to suit your local/ http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_xend.html s/dom0 cpus/dom0-cpus/ http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_CPUs.html s/its typically better/it’s typically better/ http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_Virtual_Machine_Managervirt_manager.html s/with shell privilages on the host/with shell privileges on the host/ http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/sect-Virtualization-THow_To_troubleshoot_Red_Hat_Virtualization-Interpreting_Error_Messages.html s/xm create –c va base/ xm create –c va-base/ s/depreciation/deprecation/
[mhideo@mhideo en-US]$ svn ci -m"BZ#449712" Sending en-US/Block_Devices.xml Sending en-US/Concept_Managing_CPUs.xml Sending en-US/Network_Devices.xml Sending en-US/System_Requirements.xml Sending en-US/Task_Installation_Guest.xml Sending en-US/Task_Installation_Guest_2.xml Sending en-US/Task_Troubleshooting.xml Sending en-US/Task_xend.xml Sending en-US/Virtualization_Limitations.xml Sending en-US/Virtualization_Live_Migration.xml Transmitting file data .......... Committed revision 6821.
All are fixed in the present release