Bug 903085

Summary:	[Typo] typos found in this guide
Product:	[Retired] Subscription Asset Manager	Reporter:	Noriko Mizumoto <noriko>
Component:	Docs Installation Guide	Assignee:	Deon Ballard <dlackey>
Status:	CLOSED ERRATA	QA Contact:	Katello Bug Bin <katello-bugs>
Severity:	unspecified	Docs Contact:
Priority:	unspecified
Version:	1.3	CC:	bkearney, mmccune, sthirugn
Target Milestone:	rc	Keywords:	Triaged
Target Release:	1.3
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Last Closed:	2013-10-01 11:03:59 UTC	Type:	Bug
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Description Noriko Mizumoto 2013-01-23 06:04:08 UTC

Hi Dan,
As per irc chat, I will recort the typos found :-)


Accessing_SAM.xml and ContentManagement.xml
"The attachment of a subscription by a client machine. For example, a machine can receive an entitlement for Red Hat Enterprise Linux Server. "

* 'by a client machine' => 'to a client machine'

VirtualEnvironments.xml
"Red Hat layered products usually do not draw any distinction between virtual and physical systems; the same type of subscription is used for both. If the system is a virtual machine, then virtual subscriptions are listed with the available subscriptions. If no more virtual subscriptions are available, then the subscription service will apply physical subscriptions."

* 'the same type of subscription is used for both.' => 'the same type of subscription can be used for both.'

Comment 1 Noriko Mizumoto 2013-01-24 02:04:53 UTC

Administration.xml
"Open a <application>terminal</application> session and enter the following command:"

* '<application>terminal</application>' -> terminal
The term terminal can be translated, so please take off the tag. This sentence is used twice within same file.

Comment 2 Deon Ballard 2013-03-27 17:17:47 UTC

I have this checked into SVN. I don't have any updated builds yet.

Comment 3 Bryan Kearney 2013-06-06 20:50:59 UTC

Moving all POST / MODIFIED bugs to ON_QA due to the new builds.

Comment 4 Deon Ballard 2013-08-13 14:18:29 UTC

Some of these typos are no longer relevant, after the reorg in the SAM 1.3 / subscription docs.

1a. and 1b. I dropped the term lists at the beginning of the chapters (after conversation with Dan).

2. The virtual section is undergoing revision. The main description is in the consolidated doc (and the derived RHSM doc): http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Subscription_Management/1/html/Consolidated_Subscription_Management_Guide/ents-virtual.html

The noted sentence has been rewritten into the bolded sentence in that section.

3. The parts about editing a file used to say to open the terminal first. I just removed that part, because it was unnecessary.
http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Subscription_Management/1/html/Using_Subscription_Asset_Manager/sect-Installation_Guide-Administration-Managing_Users_with_LDAP_Authentication.html#sam-ldap-config

Comment 5 sthirugn@redhat.com 2013-09-26 21:34:00 UTC

Verified as per the Comment 4

Comment 7 errata-xmlrpc 2013-10-01 11:03:59 UTC

Since the problem described in this bug report should be
resolved in a recent advisory, it has been closed with a
resolution of ERRATA.

For information on the advisory, and where to find the updated
files, follow the link below.

If the solution does not work for you, open a new bug report.

http://rhn.redhat.com/errata/RHEA-2013-1390.html