Bug 903085 - [Typo] typos found in this guide
Summary: [Typo] typos found in this guide
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Status: CLOSED ERRATA
Alias: None
Product: Subscription Asset Manager
Classification: Retired
Component: Docs Installation Guide
Version: 1.3
Hardware: Unspecified
OS: Unspecified
unspecified
unspecified
Target Milestone: rc
: 1.3
Assignee: Deon Ballard
QA Contact: Katello Bug Bin
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Blocks: sam13-tracker
TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2013-01-23 06:04 UTC by Noriko Mizumoto
Modified: 2013-10-01 11:03 UTC (History)
3 users (show)

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Last Closed: 2013-10-01 11:03:59 UTC
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Red Hat Product Errata RHEA-2013:1390 0 normal SHIPPED_LIVE Release 1.3 of Subscription Asset Manager 2013-10-01 14:43:14 UTC

Description Noriko Mizumoto 2013-01-23 06:04:08 UTC
Hi Dan,
As per irc chat, I will recort the typos found :-)


Accessing_SAM.xml and ContentManagement.xml
"The attachment of a subscription by a client machine. For example, a machine can receive an entitlement for Red Hat Enterprise Linux Server. "

* 'by a client machine' => 'to a client machine'

VirtualEnvironments.xml
"Red Hat layered products usually do not draw any distinction between virtual and physical systems; the same type of subscription is used for both. If the system is a virtual machine, then virtual subscriptions are listed with the available subscriptions. If no more virtual subscriptions are available, then the subscription service will apply physical subscriptions."

* 'the same type of subscription is used for both.' => 'the same type of subscription can be used for both.'

Comment 1 Noriko Mizumoto 2013-01-24 02:04:53 UTC
Administration.xml
"Open a <application>terminal</application> session and enter the following command:"

* '<application>terminal</application>' -> terminal
The term terminal can be translated, so please take off the tag. This sentence is used twice within same file.

Comment 2 Deon Ballard 2013-03-27 17:17:47 UTC
I have this checked into SVN. I don't have any updated builds yet.

Comment 3 Bryan Kearney 2013-06-06 20:50:59 UTC
Moving all POST / MODIFIED bugs to ON_QA due to the new builds.

Comment 4 Deon Ballard 2013-08-13 14:18:29 UTC
Some of these typos are no longer relevant, after the reorg in the SAM 1.3 / subscription docs.

1a. and 1b. I dropped the term lists at the beginning of the chapters (after conversation with Dan).

2. The virtual section is undergoing revision. The main description is in the consolidated doc (and the derived RHSM doc): http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Subscription_Management/1/html/Consolidated_Subscription_Management_Guide/ents-virtual.html

The noted sentence has been rewritten into the bolded sentence in that section.

3. The parts about editing a file used to say to open the terminal first. I just removed that part, because it was unnecessary.
http://documentation-devel.engineering.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Subscription_Management/1/html/Using_Subscription_Asset_Manager/sect-Installation_Guide-Administration-Managing_Users_with_LDAP_Authentication.html#sam-ldap-config

Comment 5 sthirugn@redhat.com 2013-09-26 21:34:00 UTC
Verified as per the Comment 4

Comment 7 errata-xmlrpc 2013-10-01 11:03:59 UTC
Since the problem described in this bug report should be
resolved in a recent advisory, it has been closed with a
resolution of ERRATA.

For information on the advisory, and where to find the updated
files, follow the link below.

If the solution does not work for you, open a new bug report.

http://rhn.redhat.com/errata/RHEA-2013-1390.html


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