Bug 969906
Summary: | Add Section to Part: Validating the Installation with new tour of initial cloud with dashboard. | ||
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Product: | Red Hat OpenStack | Reporter: | Summer Long <slong> |
Component: | doc-Installation_and_Configuration_Guide | Assignee: | Deepti Navale <dnavale> |
Status: | CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE | QA Contact: | ecs-bugs |
Severity: | medium | Docs Contact: | |
Priority: | medium | ||
Version: | 4.0 | CC: | sgordon, slong, sradvan |
Target Milestone: | z2 | Keywords: | Documentation, Triaged |
Target Release: | 4.0 | ||
Hardware: | Unspecified | ||
OS: | Unspecified | ||
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Fixed In Version: | Doc Type: | Bug Fix | |
Doc Text: | Story Points: | --- | |
Clone Of: | Environment: | ||
Last Closed: | 2014-03-04 00:04:51 UTC | Type: | Bug |
Regression: | --- | Mount Type: | --- |
Documentation: | --- | CRM: | |
Verified Versions: | Category: | --- | |
oVirt Team: | --- | RHEL 7.3 requirements from Atomic Host: | |
Cloudforms Team: | --- | Target Upstream Version: | |
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Comment 2
Summer Long
2013-09-24 23:10:56 UTC
Included chapter 'Touring the Cloud' in Part: Validating the Installation'. This chapter describes the different tab options available on the OpenStack Dashboard for admin and demo users. Here you go: * Admin Tab- The Admin tab enables the administrators to view usage and manage instances, volumes, flavors, images, projects, users, services and quotas. [Comment] services and quotas. -> services, and quotas. * Admin Tab- Based on whether you have logged into the OpenStack Dashboard as an administrator or as a user, the main window shows the Admin, Project and Red Hat tabs or the Project and Red Hat tabs respectively. [Comment] Would use: The Admin tab is only displayed in the main window if you have logged in as an administrator. * Admin Tab- System Panel tab listing [Comment] For readability, would rework into a table. (Yes, I know this is how Diane did it, but we don't have to. Hah!) Change for the Project and Red Hat tab as well. * Admin Tab- Resource Usage [Comment] Fix the 'listing' commas (see above). Remove 'respectively', doesn't add anything. * Admin Tab- Flavors. 'A flavor is size for an instance.' [Comment] This needs more. Why not just say size? * Admin Tab- System Info [Comment] Use '-' instead of ':'. ':' usually means you're going to see a list. Change for other sub-listings as well. * Project Tab- Instances [Comment] 'through VNC' -> 'through the ?? (VNC)' * Project Tab - Network Topology [Comment] Repeated twice? (the first is better...) 'Interactive topology' -> 'View the interactive topology' * Project Tab - Containers [Comment] 'Create and delete storage containers.' And could easily use a bit of the text from the gui's help, to say something about containers. * Project Tab - Stacks [Comment] 'Use REST API' -> 'Use the REST API'. But is this true? I can't see it, but doesn't the GUI sit between you and the API? * Red Hat Tab - Intro [Comment] '..check the log file for Instances'. Names of created or running instances? And, that's all the log files contain? |