Bug 969906
| Summary: | Add Section to Part: Validating the Installation with new tour of initial cloud with dashboard. | ||
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| Product: | Red Hat OpenStack | Reporter: | Summer Long <slong> |
| Component: | doc-Installation_and_Configuration_Guide | Assignee: | Deepti Navale <dnavale> |
| Status: | CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE | QA Contact: | ecs-bugs |
| Severity: | medium | Docs Contact: | |
| Priority: | medium | ||
| Version: | 4.0 | CC: | sgordon, slong, sradvan |
| Target Milestone: | z2 | Keywords: | Documentation, Triaged |
| Target Release: | 4.0 | ||
| Hardware: | Unspecified | ||
| OS: | Unspecified | ||
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| Fixed In Version: | Doc Type: | Bug Fix | |
| Doc Text: | Story Points: | --- | |
| Clone Of: | Environment: | ||
| Last Closed: | 2014-03-04 00:04:51 UTC | Type: | Bug |
| Regression: | --- | Mount Type: | --- |
| Documentation: | --- | CRM: | |
| Verified Versions: | Category: | --- | |
| oVirt Team: | --- | RHEL 7.3 requirements from Atomic Host: | |
| Cloudforms Team: | --- | Target Upstream Version: | |
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Comment 2
Summer Long
2013-09-24 23:10:56 UTC
Included chapter 'Touring the Cloud' in Part: Validating the Installation'. This chapter describes the different tab options available on the OpenStack Dashboard for admin and demo users. Here you go:
* Admin Tab- The Admin tab enables the administrators to view usage and manage instances, volumes, flavors, images, projects, users, services and quotas.
[Comment] services and quotas. -> services, and quotas.
* Admin Tab- Based on whether you have logged into the OpenStack Dashboard as an administrator or as a user, the main window shows the Admin, Project and Red Hat tabs or the Project and Red Hat tabs respectively.
[Comment] Would use: The Admin tab is only displayed in the main window if you have logged in as an administrator.
* Admin Tab- System Panel tab listing
[Comment] For readability, would rework into a table. (Yes, I know this is how Diane did it, but we don't have to. Hah!) Change for the Project and Red Hat tab as well.
* Admin Tab- Resource Usage
[Comment] Fix the 'listing' commas (see above). Remove 'respectively', doesn't add anything.
* Admin Tab- Flavors. 'A flavor is size for an instance.'
[Comment] This needs more. Why not just say size?
* Admin Tab- System Info
[Comment] Use '-' instead of ':'. ':' usually means you're going to see a list.
Change for other sub-listings as well.
* Project Tab- Instances
[Comment] 'through VNC' -> 'through the ?? (VNC)'
* Project Tab - Network Topology
[Comment] Repeated twice? (the first is better...)
'Interactive topology' -> 'View the interactive topology'
* Project Tab - Containers
[Comment] 'Create and delete storage containers.' And could easily use a bit of the text from the gui's help, to say something about containers.
* Project Tab - Stacks
[Comment] 'Use REST API' -> 'Use the REST API'. But is this true? I can't see it, but doesn't the GUI sit between you and the API?
* Red Hat Tab - Intro
[Comment] '..check the log file for Instances'. Names of created or running instances? And, that's all the log files contain?
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