Bug 969906 - Add Section to Part: Validating the Installation with new tour of initial cloud with dashboard.
Summary: Add Section to Part: Validating the Installation with new tour of initial clo...
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Product: Red Hat OpenStack
Classification: Red Hat
Component: doc-Installation_and_Configuration_Guide   
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Version: 4.0
Hardware: Unspecified Unspecified
Target Milestone: z2
: 4.0
Assignee: Deepti Navale
QA Contact: ecs-bugs
Keywords: Documentation, Triaged
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Reported: 2013-06-03 01:19 UTC by Summer Long
Modified: 2014-05-27 01:29 UTC (History)
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Last Closed: 2014-03-04 00:04:51 UTC
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Comment 2 Summer Long 2013-09-24 23:10:56 UTC
Moving install bugs over to you, Scott.
Will now go into, if not already dealt with in, the Validating the Dashboard section.

Comment 3 Deepti Navale 2014-01-24 04:14:54 UTC
Included chapter 'Touring the Cloud' in Part: Validating the Installation'. This chapter describes the different tab options available on the OpenStack Dashboard for admin and demo users.

Comment 5 Summer Long 2014-01-28 00:21:34 UTC
Here you go:
* Admin Tab- The Admin tab enables the administrators to view usage and manage instances, volumes, flavors, images, projects, users, services and quotas.
[Comment] services and quotas. -> services, and quotas.

* Admin Tab- Based on whether you have logged into the OpenStack Dashboard as an administrator or as a user, the main window shows the Admin, Project and Red Hat tabs or the Project and Red Hat tabs respectively.
[Comment] Would use: The Admin tab is only displayed in the main window if you have logged in as an administrator.

* Admin Tab- System Panel tab listing
[Comment] For readability, would rework into a table. (Yes, I know this is how Diane did it, but we don't have to. Hah!) Change for the Project and Red Hat tab as well.

* Admin Tab- Resource Usage
[Comment] Fix the 'listing' commas (see above). Remove 'respectively', doesn't add anything.

* Admin Tab- Flavors. 'A flavor is size for an instance.'
[Comment] This needs more. Why not just say size?

* Admin Tab- System Info
[Comment] Use '-' instead of ':'.  ':' usually means you're going to see a list.
Change for other sub-listings as well.

* Project Tab- Instances
[Comment] 'through VNC' -> 'through the ?? (VNC)'

* Project Tab - Network Topology
[Comment]  Repeated twice? (the first is better...) 
           'Interactive topology' -> 'View the interactive topology'

* Project Tab - Containers
[Comment] 'Create and delete storage containers.' And could easily use a bit of the text from the gui's help, to say something about containers.

* Project Tab - Stacks
[Comment] 'Use REST API' -> 'Use the REST API'. But is this true? I can't see it, but doesn't the GUI sit between you and the API?

* Red Hat Tab - Intro
[Comment] '..check the log file for Instances'. Names of created or running instances? And, that's all the log files contain?

Comment 6 Deepti Navale 2014-01-30 05:33:16 UTC
Updated the chapter 'Touring the Cloud' according to review comment 5.

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