Bug 973845

Summary: Duplication of content in sections 3.1.1. Operating System Requirements & 3.1.2. Software Repository Configuration
Product: Red Hat OpenStack Reporter: Bruce Reeler <breeler>
Component: doc-Installation_and_Configuration_GuideAssignee: Martin Lopes <mlopes>
Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE QA Contact: ecs-bugs
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Version: 3.0CC: alyoung, rlandman, sgordon, slong
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Target Release: 4.0   
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Fixed In Version: Red_Hat_OpenStack-Installation_and_Configuration_Guide-3-en-US-3-24 Doc Type: Bug Fix
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Last Closed: 2014-01-06 04:25:44 UTC Type: Bug
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Description Bruce Reeler 2013-06-12 23:10:48 UTC 
Document URL: 
https://access.redhat.com/site/documentation/en-US/Red_Hat_OpenStack/3/html/Installation_and_Configuration_Guide/chap-Prerequisites.html#sect-Software_Requirements

Section Number and Name: 
2.1. Software Requirements

Describe the issue: 
sections 2.1.1. Operating System Requirements & 2.1.2. Software Repository Configuration have near identical wording and identical "Important" admonitions.
As one section follows on the other directly it reads rather repetitively. Not sure it was meant to be done this way?

Suggestions for improvement: 
Re-word to remove duplication.

Additional information: 
These sections have also been copied to the Getting Started Guide. If this is a valid bug to fix, it should be cloned for GSG too.
Comment 2 Stephen Gordon 2013-06-19 21:12:48 UTC 
Latest update in "Register to Red Hat Network" - ID: 15955 [rev: 466989]
Comment 3 Stephen Gordon 2013-06-25 12:40:05 UTC 
Moving to 4.0 as while some work was done on this it's still a little jumbled.
Comment 4 Martin Lopes 2013-11-10 23:53:05 UTC 
Summer reviewed. Ready for QA when package is available.