Bug 1019034 - Bug: improve sentence
Summary: Bug: improve sentence
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Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE
Alias: None
Deadline: 2013-10-17
Product: JBoss Data Grid 6
Classification: JBoss
Component: Documentation
Version: 6.2.0
Hardware: Unspecified
OS: Unspecified
unspecified
unspecified
Target Milestone: ER4
: 6.2.0
Assignee: Rakesh
QA Contact: Misha H. Ali
URL:
Whiteboard:
Depends On:
Blocks:
TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2013-10-15 03:56 UTC by Misha H. Ali
Modified: 2013-11-07 22:51 UTC (History)
1 user (show)

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Doc Type: Bug Fix
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Environment:
Build Name: 12539, Getting Started Guide-6.2-Beta-3 Build Date: 14-10-2013 08:04:49 Topic ID: 8985-474751 [Latest]
Last Closed: 2013-11-07 22:51:03 UTC
Type: Bug
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Description Misha H. Ali 2013-10-15 03:56:22 UTC
Title: Adding and Replacing a Key Value

Describe the issue:

The following sentence needs to be clearer in terms of what is happening, which is that the line makes jdg check for a key value, and if it doesn't find on, it uses the value specified in the line instead of the phrase "key" as the new key value and if it does find the key value, it does nothing.

"Check if the key value is missing. If the value is not found, replace the absent value with key. If the value is found, no change occurs."

Suggest rewrites.

Scope: 1 cycle.

Comment 4 Misha H. Ali 2013-10-17 06:59:04 UTC
"Reflect" has additional connotations in this sentence. Should be replaced with something more appropriate.

Comment 6 Rakesh 2013-10-20 20:23:15 UTC
Revision entry added

Comment 8 Misha H. Ali 2013-11-07 22:51:03 UTC
This bug is approved and available at:

https://access.redhat.com/site/documentation/Red_Hat_JBoss_Data_Grid/


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