Bug 103853 - Odd sentence that should be rewritten.
Summary: Odd sentence that should be rewritten.
Keywords:
Status: CLOSED NEXTRELEASE
Alias: None
Product: Red Hat Linux
Classification: Retired
Component: rhl-rg
Version: 9
Hardware: All
OS: Linux
medium
medium
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: Johnray Fuller
QA Contact: Tammy Fox
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Whiteboard:
Depends On:
Blocks:
TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2003-09-05 18:42 UTC by Shane Owenby
Modified: 2007-04-18 16:57 UTC (History)
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Last Closed: 2003-09-08 19:47:58 UTC
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Description Shane Owenby 2003-09-05 18:42:05 UTC
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User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Linux 2.4.20-8 i686; U) Opera 7.11  [en]

Description of problem:
This sentence should be rewritten.

Redhat Linux 9.
file:/usr/share/doc/rhl-cg-en-9/s1-printing-save-config.html

(search for "is not be" )

If the /etc/cups directory or the /etc/printcap file is saved and restored to 
the same locations, the printer configuration is not be restored because each 
time the printer daemon is restarted, it creates a new /etc/printcap file from 
the special Printer Configuration Tool configuration file.

Thanks for the great docs.  Best Shane Owenby

Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable):


How reproducible:
Always

Steps to Reproduce:
1. In description
2. search
3. rewrite ;-)
    

Additional info:

Comment 1 Tammy Fox 2003-09-05 19:11:17 UTC
Great catch. Thanks! I have fixed it in CVS for the next version.

Comment 2 Shane Owenby 2003-09-05 20:41:05 UTC
These are such small nit-picks to the docs that they really don't
deserve another issue for them...so here goes #2:

open file:/usr/share/doc/rhl-rg-en-9/s1-grub-commands.html
and search for "The following is a list useful commands"

there should probably be an "of" before "useful".

Best, Shane

Comment 3 Shane Owenby 2003-09-05 20:55:48 UTC
reopening so my last comment can be addressed.  (or not ;-)

Comment 4 Shane Owenby 2003-09-05 22:56:58 UTC
One more (at least so far)

from: file:/usr/share/doc/rhl-rg-en-9/ch-iptables.html

If a rule specifies a QUEUE target, the packet to be passed to user-space.


I think there needs to be an "is" before the "to be"

Comment 5 Tammy Fox 2003-09-05 23:41:53 UTC
Changing to new component and owner.

Comment 6 Johnray Fuller 2003-09-08 19:47:58 UTC
Fixed in source for 9 & Taroon.

Thanks for the catch!


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