This bug addresses additional edits to content in the proof-of-concept guide for Red Hat Enterprise Linux OpenStack Platform scheduled for the A1 release.
Steps in the interactive section now updated. >>In the chapter on using OpenStack, can ' As a part of deployment, Packstack >>creates the following for use in the OpenStack cloud:' be replaced with 'You >>can now access your environment using the following credentials:' or similar? >>Also, what is the difference between an admin user and the demo user? yup, updated. Also reworked the structure so that usage is obvious. >>In the same topic, can the warning box about the file containing passwords, >>etc. be moved before the procedures where such files are generated? Seems like >>something we need to tell users to look out for before they get going, and >>users will presumably have one already if they are performing a >>non-interactive installation. yup, farmed out to the end of each deployment procedure. Various additional edits.
Last edits finished. Also: * Reworked subtitle/abstract/intro to move intent from GSG to Packstack guide. * Restructured/moved 'remove' appendix up into a chapter. * Moved 'prepare' chapter sections into 'requirements' chapter, and restructured. Andrew, want to take another review pass? Have just built to docs-devel: Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux_OpenStack_Platform-Deploying_OpenStack_Proof_of_Concept_Environments-6-web-en-US-6.0.1-2.el6eng Might take a bit to appear. thanks, Summer
Looks good to me. Moving to VERIFIED.