Bug 1193135 - Review Comments on Multiboot Guide version 0.1
Summary: Review Comments on Multiboot Guide version 0.1
Alias: None
Product: Fedora Documentation
Classification: Fedora
Component: multiboot-guide
Version: devel
Hardware: x86_64
OS: Windows
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: Pete Travis
QA Contact: Fedora Docs QA
Depends On:
TreeView+ depends on / blocked
Reported: 2015-02-16 16:08 UTC by Sandra McCann
Modified: 2015-11-03 04:07 UTC (History)
2 users (show)

Fixed In Version:
Doc Type: Bug Fix
Doc Text:
Clone Of:
Last Closed: 2015-11-03 04:07:18 UTC

Attachments (Terms of Use)
smccann comments to multiboot guide. (258.18 KB, application/pdf)
2015-02-16 16:08 UTC, Sandra McCann
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Description Sandra McCann 2015-02-16 16:08:45 UTC
Created attachment 992259 [details]
smccann comments to multiboot guide.

Attaching a pdf with a few comments from the perspective of a newbie to both Fedora and multiboot.  In general, very readable and understandable guide!

Comment 1 Pete Travis 2015-02-16 16:23:14 UTC
Thanks for the review, Sandra.  You've made some good suggestions that I will incorporate soon.

Comment 2 Pete Travis 2015-11-03 04:07:18 UTC
After a prolonged delay, I've incorporated many of your suggestions into the guide.  Thanks again for the review!

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