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smccann comments to multiboot guide.
Attaching a pdf with a few comments from the perspective of a newbie to both Fedora and multiboot. In general, very readable and understandable guide!
Thanks for the review, Sandra. You've made some good suggestions that I will incorporate soon.
After a prolonged delay, I've incorporated many of your suggestions into the guide. Thanks again for the review!