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Bug 1202605 - [Doc] Bugs found during translation
[Doc] Bugs found during translation
Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE
Product: Red Hat OpenStack
Classification: Red Hat
Component: doc-Deploying_OpenStack_Proof_of_Concept_Environments (Show other bugs)
6.0 (Juno)
Unspecified Unspecified
unspecified Severity unspecified
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: 6.0 (Juno)
Assigned To: Summer Long
: Documentation, Triaged
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Blocks: 1199866
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Reported: 2015-03-16 22:36 EDT by Yuko Katabami
Modified: 2015-03-17 00:38 EDT (History)
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Last Closed: 2015-03-17 00:38:59 EDT
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Description Yuko Katabami 2015-03-16 22:36:58 EDT 
Description of problem:
We found some writing bugs during translating this book into Japanese.
Summer Long has provided us the answers and we applied the changes to the translations but I have been asked to file those here so that they can be applied to English version.

Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable): 6.0


How reproducible: 100%


Steps to Reproduce:

Please check 4 x bugs listed below:


1) 
File: topics/Editing_a_PackStack_Answer_File
String: If using the NFS storage protocol, this parameter is mandatory for storage service catalog support (utilized by Block Storage volume type extra_specs support). Optional.
Comment: Confirmed with Summer that it means that the parameter is optional except for the time when NFS storage protocol is used.


2)
File: topics/Running_PackStack_Interactively
String: A number of software packages required by OpenStack are kept in the optional chapter
Comment: Confirmed with Summer that "optional chapter" should be "optional repositories"

3)
File: topics/Quick_Start_Deployment_using_PackStack
String: Packstack prompts you to enter the password of the <systemitem>root</systemitem> user for each system in the deployment (connects to the system and installs Puppet which is the tool used to facilitate the rest of the deployment).
Comment: The interpretation for the part enclosed in brackets is: ..in the deployment; Packstack uses the password to connect to each system and install Puppet which is the tool used to facilitate the rest of the deployment.

4)
File: topics/Editing_a_PackStack_Answer_File
String: Threshold for last-access time for images in the NFS image cache. When a cache-cleaning cycle begins, images in the cache that have not been accessed in the last M minutes, where M is the value of this parameter, are deleted from the cache to create free space on the NFS share. Optional.
Comment: Summer rephrased the first sentence as follows:Time period (in minutes) that is allowed to elapse after the image is last accessed before it is deleted from the NFS cache. When a cache-cleaning...

Actual results:
The current English content is as-is

Expected results:
It should reflect those answers to correct/clarify the information.

Additional info:
Comment 3 Summer Long 2015-03-17 00:38:59 EDT 
1) Updated ONFIG_CINDER_NETAPP_VSERVER.
2) Already updated.
3) This sentence was already edited out of existence :)
4) Updated CONFIG_CINDER_NETAPP_EXPIRY_THRES_MINUTES.

Yuko has already confirmed that the new text is clearer. Closing.
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