Description of problem: We found some writing bugs during translating this book into Japanese. Summer Long has provided us the answers and we applied the changes to the translations but I have been asked to file those here so that they can be applied to English version. Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable): 6.0 How reproducible: 100% Steps to Reproduce: Please check 4 x bugs listed below: 1) File: topics/Editing_a_PackStack_Answer_File String: If using the NFS storage protocol, this parameter is mandatory for storage service catalog support (utilized by Block Storage volume type extra_specs support). Optional. Comment: Confirmed with Summer that it means that the parameter is optional except for the time when NFS storage protocol is used. 2) File: topics/Running_PackStack_Interactively String: A number of software packages required by OpenStack are kept in the optional chapter Comment: Confirmed with Summer that "optional chapter" should be "optional repositories" 3) File: topics/Quick_Start_Deployment_using_PackStack String: Packstack prompts you to enter the password of the <systemitem>root</systemitem> user for each system in the deployment (connects to the system and installs Puppet which is the tool used to facilitate the rest of the deployment). Comment: The interpretation for the part enclosed in brackets is: ..in the deployment; Packstack uses the password to connect to each system and install Puppet which is the tool used to facilitate the rest of the deployment. 4) File: topics/Editing_a_PackStack_Answer_File String: Threshold for last-access time for images in the NFS image cache. When a cache-cleaning cycle begins, images in the cache that have not been accessed in the last M minutes, where M is the value of this parameter, are deleted from the cache to create free space on the NFS share. Optional. Comment: Summer rephrased the first sentence as follows:Time period (in minutes) that is allowed to elapse after the image is last accessed before it is deleted from the NFS cache. When a cache-cleaning... Actual results: The current English content is as-is Expected results: It should reflect those answers to correct/clarify the information. Additional info:
1) Updated ONFIG_CINDER_NETAPP_VSERVER. 2) Already updated. 3) This sentence was already edited out of existence :) 4) Updated CONFIG_CINDER_NETAPP_EXPIRY_THRES_MINUTES. Yuko has already confirmed that the new text is clearer. Closing.