Created attachment 1026450 [details] Release Notes Edit example -- grade 5 versus high-school english Description of problem: The embedded release notes /usr/share/doc/fedora-release-notes differs from the release notes posted on the website In addition the /usr/share/release notes refers to Fedora 19 in some links. Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable): Fedora 22 Beta TC4 due to be released 26 May How reproducible: Steps to Reproduce: 1. 2. 3. Actual results: Expected results: Good grammar and good release notes. The release notes should be on the wiki, where many eyes can see and improve them. Additional info: Justification for wiki Refer to attached two example of documentation (before editing and after editing)
Your summary is different from your description and the attachment is different too. The release notes are on the wiki during initial development and the copy changes have already been discussed, so that leaves the packaged relnotes: an updated package has been submitted.