Bug 1225034
| Summary: | Install guide edit of the PDF pages. | ||
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| Product: | [Retired] Fedora Documentation | Reporter: | Leslie Satenstein <lsatenstein> |
| Component: | install-guide | Assignee: | Petr Bokoc <pbokoc> |
| Status: | CLOSED NOTABUG | QA Contact: | Fedora Docs QA <docs-qa> |
| Severity: | unspecified | Docs Contact: | |
| Priority: | unspecified | ||
| Version: | devel | CC: | lsatenstein, pbokoc, zach |
| Target Milestone: | --- | ||
| Target Release: | --- | ||
| Hardware: | Unspecified | ||
| OS: | Unspecified | ||
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| Fixed In Version: | Doc Type: | Bug Fix | |
| Doc Text: | Story Points: | --- | |
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| Last Closed: | 2017-05-08 14:13:27 UTC | Type: | Bug |
| Regression: | --- | Mount Type: | --- |
| Documentation: | --- | CRM: | |
| Verified Versions: | Category: | --- | |
| oVirt Team: | --- | RHEL 7.3 requirements from Atomic Host: | |
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Created attachment 1035777 [details]
LibreOffice 200 page edit of Install guide identifying typos and grammer improvements
I took the occasion to read in fine detail, over a period of days, each paragraph. I found spelling errors and typographical errors as well as places where sentences were missing words, or where better words would apply.
I am also uploading the PDF so that the author can review my changes against the PDF version and decide for himself, if the change makes a difference.
No proposed changes to the technical logic was made but omissions were identified so that the author can do his own confirmations.
Created attachment 1035778 [details]
The PDF file against which the edits were run
The pdf file which is a version of the exceptionally well done installation guide.
The libreoffice document covers 200 pages but itself is only a few pages in number. The reader should not interpret the comments that there was a 1 for 1 of corrections to pdf pages., The entire manual was proofed. Not followed up |
Created attachment 1029929 [details] LibreOffice editing comments against the first 25 pages of the Install guide. Description of problem: There were many typos and statements that do not apply to Fedora 22. The attached libreoffice document details the editing I have performed for the first 25 pages of the PDF manual version. If you reject the errors or accept them, please respond to this bugzilla report so that I may know if it is worth doing the next 25 of the 200 pdf pages. Refer also to 100875 Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable): Install guide for Fedora 22 How reproducible: Steps to Reproduce: 1. 2. 3. Actual results: Expected results: Additional info: