Created attachment 1029929 [details] LibreOffice editing comments against the first 25 pages of the Install guide. Description of problem: There were many typos and statements that do not apply to Fedora 22. The attached libreoffice document details the editing I have performed for the first 25 pages of the PDF manual version. If you reject the errors or accept them, please respond to this bugzilla report so that I may know if it is worth doing the next 25 of the 200 pdf pages. Refer also to 100875 Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable): Install guide for Fedora 22 How reproducible: Steps to Reproduce: 1. 2. 3. Actual results: Expected results: Additional info:
Created attachment 1035777 [details] LibreOffice 200 page edit of Install guide identifying typos and grammer improvements I took the occasion to read in fine detail, over a period of days, each paragraph. I found spelling errors and typographical errors as well as places where sentences were missing words, or where better words would apply. I am also uploading the PDF so that the author can review my changes against the PDF version and decide for himself, if the change makes a difference. No proposed changes to the technical logic was made but omissions were identified so that the author can do his own confirmations.
Created attachment 1035778 [details] The PDF file against which the edits were run The pdf file which is a version of the exceptionally well done installation guide.
The libreoffice document covers 200 pages but itself is only a few pages in number. The reader should not interpret the comments that there was a 1 for 1 of corrections to pdf pages.,
The entire manual was proofed.
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