Bug 1328824 - Run-on/confusing UI admonition text in the create cluster workflow
Summary: Run-on/confusing UI admonition text in the create cluster workflow
Keywords:
Status: CLOSED ERRATA
Alias: None
Product: Red Hat Storage Console
Classification: Red Hat Storage
Component: UI
Version: 2
Hardware: Unspecified
OS: Unspecified
unspecified
unspecified
Target Milestone: ---
: 2
Assignee: kamlesh
QA Contact: sds-qe-bugs
URL:
Whiteboard:
Depends On:
Blocks: Console-2-DevFreeze
TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2016-04-20 11:15 UTC by Rakesh
Modified: 2016-08-23 19:49 UTC (History)
8 users (show)

Fixed In Version: rhscon-ui-0.0.46-1.el7scon.noarch
Doc Type: Bug Fix
Doc Text:
Clone Of:
Environment:
Last Closed: 2016-08-23 19:49:24 UTC
Embargoed:


Attachments (Terms of Use)
create cluster mesg (235.90 KB, image/png)
2016-06-17 13:58 UTC, Ju Lim
no flags Details
create clsuter mesg - correct text (231.73 KB, image/png)
2016-06-17 14:02 UTC, Ju Lim
no flags Details
USM Cluster Expand link (46.55 KB, image/png)
2016-06-20 11:52 UTC, Daniel Horák
no flags Details


Links
System ID Private Priority Status Summary Last Updated
Red Hat Product Errata RHEA-2016:1754 0 normal SHIPPED_LIVE New packages: Red Hat Storage Console 2.0 2017-04-18 19:09:06 UTC

Comment 2 Nishanth Thomas 2016-05-05 07:16:29 UTC
Matt,

Can you suggest?

Comment 3 Matt Carrano 2016-05-05 13:12:01 UTC
Can someone provide a screenshot of this?  I have no idea what text this refers to.

Comment 4 Rakesh 2016-05-06 08:33:42 UTC
(In reply to Matt Carrano from comment #3)
> Can someone provide a screenshot of this?  I have no idea what text this
> refers to.

Hey Matt, the screenshot is attached to this bug.

Comment 5 Matt Carrano 2016-05-06 13:57:28 UTC
Hi Rakesh. There are no attachments when I view this.  Can you try attaching again?

Comment 8 Sharmilla Abhilash 2016-06-17 10:42:01 UTC
Matt, Can you please help us here. thanks!

Comment 9 Ju Lim 2016-06-17 13:58:50 UTC
Created attachment 1169134 [details]
create cluster mesg

Comment 10 Ju Lim 2016-06-17 14:02:07 UTC
Created attachment 1169135 [details]
create clsuter mesg - correct text

Comment 11 Ju Lim 2016-06-17 14:06:13 UTC
Actual text shown: 
Automatic cluster expansion will be enabled, whenever new disks or host added to this cluster, it will expand automatically.

Recommended text from design:
Automatic cluster expansion will be enabled.  Whenever new disks or hosts are added to this cluster, it will be expanded automatically.


Please fix to the Recommended text as the actual implemented text has grammar issues and sentence run-on.

Comment 12 Daniel Horák 2016-06-20 11:52:07 UTC
Created attachment 1169870 [details]
USM Cluster Expand link

If I didn't miss anything, the "automatic expansion" works only for newly attached disks to hosts which are already part of existing cluster.
If you want to add completely new host, you have to expand the cluster manually via the "Expand" link in the popup menu (see attachment in this comment).

In other words, the text should note something like this:
  Automatic cluster expansion will be enabled.  Whenever new disks are added to the host of this cluster, it will be expanded automatically.

Comment 15 Ju Lim 2016-06-20 20:47:20 UTC
Actually Daniel Horak is correct that Expand is how disks get added for new hosts.  For existing hosts in a cluster, it will add automatically.

Thus, the wording for the text should be:

Automatic cluster expansion will be enabled.  Whenever new disks are added to any host of this cluster, it will be expanded automatically.

Comment 19 Matt Carrano 2016-06-21 17:53:21 UTC
My problem with adding "By default" at the beginning of this is that it implies that a user can change this setting, which to my understanding they cannot.  The intent here was only to inform the user that cluster expansion will be automatic.  As for other wordsmithing, the goal is to keep on-screen instructions as concise as possible.  I can see where substituting "the cluster" for "it" can clear up some possible ambiguity.

Comment 21 kamlesh 2016-06-30 06:56:13 UTC
So here, what is the final wording for the text should be ?

Comment 22 Matt Carrano 2016-06-30 13:06:48 UTC
Please use:

Automatic cluster expansion will be enabled.  Whenever new disks are added to any host of this cluster, the cluster will be expanded automatically.

Comment 24 Martin Kudlej 2016-07-15 06:54:57 UTC
Tested with 
ceph-ansible-1.0.5-25.el7scon.noarch
ceph-installer-1.0.12-4.el7scon.noarch
rhscon-ceph-0.0.32-1.el7scon.x86_64
rhscon-core-0.0.33-1.el7scon.x86_64
rhscon-core-selinux-0.0.33-1.el7scon.noarch
rhscon-ui-0.0.47-1.el7scon.noarch
and it works.

Comment 26 errata-xmlrpc 2016-08-23 19:49:24 UTC
Since the problem described in this bug report should be
resolved in a recent advisory, it has been closed with a
resolution of ERRATA.

For information on the advisory, and where to find the updated
files, follow the link below.

If the solution does not work for you, open a new bug report.

https://access.redhat.com/errata/RHEA-2016:1754


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