Bug 1361846 - Typos & Reformulations needed
Summary: Typos & Reformulations needed
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Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE
Alias: None
Product: Fedora Documentation
Classification: Fedora
Component: virtualization-getting-started-guide
Version: devel
Hardware: Unspecified
OS: Unspecified
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Assignee: Dayle Parker
QA Contact: Fedora Docs QA
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TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2016-07-31 08:08 UTC by David Tonhofer
Modified: 2019-08-02 07:24 UTC (History)
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Last Closed: 2019-08-02 07:24:36 UTC
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Description David Tonhofer 2016-07-31 08:08:40 UTC
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https://docs.fedoraproject.org/en-US/Fedora/23/html/Virtualization_Getting_Started_Guide/sec-libvirt-libvirt-tools.html

contains this text:

"The management tools can be located on separate physical machines from the host using secure protocols. libvirt is the the foundation of the Gnome application: gnome-boxes is built apon. "

This probably needs reformulation.

Comment 1 Glen Rundblom 2016-07-31 21:35:36 UTC
Cleaned up section of Products.xml, about libvirt and removed the double the and un-needed text at the end of the paragraph

Committed to the new pagure.io repo:
https://pagure.io/virt-getting-started-guide

Thanks for catching that,
-Glen


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