Bug 1412034 - Minor typos of RHEL6.9 Beta Virtualization Getting Started Guide.
Summary: Minor typos of RHEL6.9 Beta Virtualization Getting Started Guide.
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Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE
Alias: None
Product: Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6
Classification: Red Hat
Component: doc-Virtualization_Getting_Started_Guide
Version: 6.9
Hardware: Unspecified
OS: Unspecified
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Target Milestone: rc
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Assignee: Yehuda Zimmerman
QA Contact: ecs-bugs
Jiri Herrmann
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TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2017-01-11 02:43 UTC by Lin Liu
Modified: 2017-03-23 17:10 UTC (History)
8 users (show)

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Last Closed: 2017-03-23 17:10:53 UTC
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Description Lin Liu 2017-01-11 02:43:51 UTC
Document URL: 
https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6-Beta/html/Virtualization_Getting_Started_Guide/chap-Virtualization_Getting_Started-Advantages.html

Section Number and Name: 
Chapter 2.1

2.1. Virtualization Costs
Virtualization can be expensive to introduce, but it often often saves money in the long term. Consider the following benefits: 
often often -> often

Describe the issue: 
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Suggestions for improvement: 
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Additional information: 


Document URL: 
https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6-Beta/html/Virtualization_Getting_Started_Guide/sec-Virtualization_Getting_Started-Quickstart_Virt-Manager-Create_VM.html
https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6-Beta/html/Virtualization_Getting_Started_Guide/sec-Virtualization_Getting_Started-Quickstart_Virt-Manager-Guest.html

Section Number and Name: 
Chapter 4.3.2 and 4.3.3

From the figures and referring link in note of these two chapters we can see that here you take the RHEL7 guest as an example, but in the description here is about RHEL6 system: "... If not, uncheck Automatically detect operating system based on install media and select Linux from the OS type drop-down and Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6 from the Version drop-down."  I think it's better to take a RHEL6 guest as example in RHEL6 product document, also in other RHEL6.9 document (such as RHEL6.9 Beta Virtualization Host Configuration and Guest Installation Guide) the guests are RHEL6 systems.
Or if you want to take RHEL7 guest as the example, it's better to adjust the version in the description from  Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6 to Red Hat Enterprise Linux 7.

Describe the issue: 
As above

Suggestions for improvement: 
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Comment 1 Xianghua Chen 2017-01-11 07:45:41 UTC
Section:
 5.5. Other Useful Tools

Exactly, these tools "guestmount virt-cat virt-df virt-edit virt-filesystems virt-inspector2 virt-ls virt-rescue virt-resize virt-sysprep" are installed as part of the libguestfs-tools-c package ,not libguestfs-tools.
But as libguestfs-tools depends on libguestfs-tools-c, so the author can decide whether to modify it.

Comment 2 Xianghua Chen 2017-01-11 07:47:11 UTC
(In reply to Xianghua Chen from comment #1)
> Section:
>  5.5. Other Useful Tools
> 
> Exactly, these tools "guestmount virt-cat virt-df virt-edit virt-filesystems
> virt-inspector2 virt-ls virt-rescue virt-resize virt-sysprep" are installed
> as part of the libguestfs-tools-c package ,not libguestfs-tools.
> But as libguestfs-tools depends on libguestfs-tools-c, so the author can
> decide whether to modify it.

Document url:
https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6-Beta/html/Virtualization_Getting_Started_Guide/sect-Virtualization_Getting_Started-Tools-other-tools.html


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