All very minor, just logging for completeness "To enable runtime support of 32-bit applications on the Intel Itanium2 " "architecture, you must install the Intel Execution Layer package from the " "Extras disc now." - Bogus comma "The autorun program cannot be found on the cd. Click \"OK\" to continue." - Every other string uses "CD" not "cd" "If you need to use network authentication such as Kerberos or NIS, please " "click the Use Network Login button." - Seems better if you make it .. ", such as Kerberos or NIS, " (or "for example") "A sound card has been detected on your computer. - Should be "in" or just "has been detected". It certainly isn't on top It also leaks the technical terms "ASCII" and "Whitespace" but I have no idea how to fix that. Also flaps between "the system" and "your system" between screens.