Bug 1489775 - Improve text in OSTree Sync section
Summary: Improve text in OSTree Sync section
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Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE
Alias: None
Product: Red Hat Satellite
Classification: Red Hat
Component: Docs Content Management Guide
Version: Unspecified
Hardware: Unspecified
OS: Unspecified
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Assignee: Michaela Slaninkova
QA Contact: Russell Dickenson
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TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2017-09-08 11:10 UTC by Stephen Wadeley
Modified: 2019-09-26 16:12 UTC (History)
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Last Closed: 2017-09-13 10:29:48 UTC
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Description Stephen Wadeley 2017-09-08 11:10:42 UTC
Document URL: 

https://access.redhat.com/documentation/en-us/red_hat_satellite/6.2/html/content_management_guide/managing_ostree_content#configuring_ostree_management_on_the_satellite_server

Section Number and Name: 

11.2. Selecting Red Hat OSTree Content to Synchronize

Describe the issue: 

In the intro, *second* paragraph, it says "Navigate to Content > Products and click on the Red Hat Enterprise Linux Atomic Host. The repository screen for this product appears."

but unless you enabled it before this point you will not see it appear under Products.

Suggestions for improvement: 

at the end of the *first* paragraph we should add the words. "Ensure you have a repository enabled."

Style issue: not supposed to say "appears". I think you could just delete that in this case.


Additional information: 

This bit is too vague:

and you want to propagate the <literal>yum</literal> content from those CVs downstream.


 I would rewrite that as "and you want to propagate the <literal>yum</literal> content from those CVs to a downstream Satellite.


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