Bug 1615212
| Summary: | Edited all the *.adoc from the git repository and have an attachment of an updated pagure.io git file | ||
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| Product: | [Retired] Fedora Documentation | Reporter: | Leslie Satenstein <lsatenstein> |
| Component: | system-administrator's-guide | Assignee: | Petr Bokoc <pbokoc> |
| Status: | CLOSED EOL | QA Contact: | Fedora Docs QA <docs-qa> |
| Severity: | unspecified | Docs Contact: | |
| Priority: | unspecified | ||
| Version: | devel | CC: | lsatenstein, swadeley |
| Target Milestone: | --- | ||
| Target Release: | --- | ||
| Hardware: | Unspecified | ||
| OS: | Unspecified | ||
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| Fixed In Version: | Doc Type: | If docs needed, set a value | |
| Doc Text: | Story Points: | --- | |
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| Last Closed: | 2019-11-07 15:30:07 UTC | Type: | Bug |
| Regression: | --- | Mount Type: | --- |
| Documentation: | --- | CRM: | |
| Verified Versions: | Category: | --- | |
| oVirt Team: | --- | RHEL 7.3 requirements from Atomic Host: | |
| Cloudforms Team: | --- | Target Upstream Version: | |
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Created attachment 1475447 [details]
git version of install guide with corrections to multiple *.adoc files.
About 50 hours of editing was done
Created attachment 1475449 [details]
Documentation writers guide update
I added a few rules to the documentation guide. To explain the differences between
in and into,
on and onto
on topic or about a topic.item.
information on was revised if it was:
information about or
information describing or
information explaining
information concerning.
Another rule
"see" vs "refer to"
if the link is within the document, I edited it to be see
If the link was to a website or external to the document, I replaced see with "refer to".
I'm closing this bug as part of a Bugzilla cleanup effort. The most likely reason is that the bug has been opened either against a component we no longer publish, or against Release Notes for an EOL release. |
Created attachment 1475446 [details] updated system-administration-guide (as a .git within a zip file) Description of problem: Guide for Fedora 28 In perusing the guides for Fedora 28, I found them with many grammar errors, from missing commas, misspellings, run-on sentences and poor grammar. Where sentences were better corrected within an *.adoc, I did that correction to the *.adoc file. I am not able to produce a diff file. But I am attaching my updated git file for the system-administrator's guide. Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable): How reproducible: Steps to Reproduce: 1. 2. 3. Actual results: Expected results: Additional info: