Bug 2021927 - Updates and enhancements needed
Summary: Updates and enhancements needed
Keywords:
Status: CLOSED EOL
Alias: None
Product: Fedora Documentation
Classification: Retired
Component: freeipa-guide
Version: devel
Hardware: Unspecified
OS: Unspecified
unspecified
medium
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: Petr Bokoc
QA Contact: Fedora Docs QA
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Blocks:
TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2021-11-10 12:45 UTC by ricky.tigg
Modified: 2024-05-21 09:23 UTC (History)
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Last Closed: 2024-05-21 09:23:37 UTC
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2021-11-10 12:45 UTC, ricky.tigg
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Description ricky.tigg 2021-11-10 12:45:43 UTC
Created attachment 1841070 [details]
Observations and suggestions

Hello. Here is a well composed and written document that has aged without having suffered hard the passage of time. Well done. According to my observations, some few sections deserve to be up-to-date as they lead the reader to conclude that the guide is obsolete and therefore do not apply to contemporary release of Fedora products. Who knows, maybe the required rectifications could be produced in correlation with the up-coming releases of Fedora 36 products – that’s Fedora 2x18!

Source: https://docs.fedoraproject.org | Fedora 18 | Edition 3.1.5 | Ella Deon Lackey | Release year: 2012 | Version number of component freeipa this document was made against: 2.2.

Comment 1 ricky.tigg 2021-11-16 14:04:50 UTC
Hello. My observations are far from being exhaustive as you shall notice it by yourself. I obviously underestimated the improvements that may be needed.

section | 2.1.1.

Referred implicitly to zram; therefore no need for swap.

section | 2.1.5.1. Configuring Networking Services

- Services NetworkManagerDispatcher and network not found.

# systemctl --now disable NetworkManagerDispatcher
Failed to disable unit: Unit file NetworkManagerDispatcher.service does not exist.
# systemctl --now enable network
Failed to enable unit: Unit file network.service does not exist.

Is Ella Deon Lackey still the maintainer?

Comment 2 Petr Bokoc 2024-05-21 09:23:37 UTC
This guide has been retired, therefore I'm closing this bug. 

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