Bug 447617
| Summary: | F9 install-guide section 3.4 text needs rearranging. | ||||||
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| Product: | [Retired] Fedora Documentation | Reporter: | Chris Schembari <cschembari> | ||||
| Component: | install-guide | Assignee: | Paul W. Frields <stickster> | ||||
| Status: | CLOSED NEXTRELEASE | QA Contact: | Paul W. Frields <stickster> | ||||
| Severity: | low | Docs Contact: | |||||
| Priority: | low | ||||||
| Version: | devel | ||||||
| Target Milestone: | --- | ||||||
| Target Release: | --- | ||||||
| Hardware: | All | ||||||
| OS: | Linux | ||||||
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| Fixed In Version: | Doc Type: | Bug Fix | |||||
| Doc Text: | Story Points: | --- | |||||
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| Last Closed: | 2008-06-28 20:59:35 UTC | Type: | --- | ||||
| Regression: | --- | Mount Type: | --- | ||||
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| Verified Versions: | Category: | --- | |||||
| oVirt Team: | --- | RHEL 7.3 requirements from Atomic Host: | |||||
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Created attachment 306179 [details]
Corrected version of a Fedora-doc web page.
I forgot to mention at the end of paragraph 2 of the description above that the line "Procedure 3.2. Creating Bootable USB Media with Linux" then comes after the procedure it describes, with no text below it. |
Description of problem: This is an error in the Fedora 9 install-guide, not "devel"; this "enter bug" page wouldn't let me select 9 under Version. In Section 3.4, the subheadings for subsections "Procedure 3.1" and "Procedure 3.2" both appear immediately /below/ the procedure that each should respectively be at the head of; that is, the title saying, "Creating Bootable USB Media with Windows" mysteriously comes /after/ the numbered procedure for doing so, and even more mysteriously comes immediately before the procedure for creating media within Linux, as if one should try to install the "livecd-tools package" within Windows by typing 'su' at the DOS prompt! Also, a paragraph ("USB media often comes [...]") and an important-note box ("Unusual USB Media") are both, I think, out of place. The first is an explanatory paragraph and should logically come before the paragraph starting with ("To make bootable USB media [...]"); and the note box should logically still (as it does now) follow directly below the "USB media often comes [...]" paragraph. Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable): Fedora 9 How reproducible: 100% Steps to Reproduce: 1. (Re-)Load page and start reading. 2. Furrow brow. 3. Repeat step 1... Actual results: "As seen on the Web", at http://docs.fedoraproject.org/install-guide/f9/en_US/sn-making-media.html Expected results: See attached file. Its text is corrected, but for some reason it doesn't have the formatting that the site has. Maybe an external style sheet? Additional info: I used Konqueror's "view document source" feature, saved a local copy, and started editing the file. I know a bit about basic HTML editing, and I was careful to move just the parts that needed moving; for example, I left in place the numbered-outline "<ol>" tags, and the "<a>" links, as they obviously must be referenced on other pages of the guide.