Bug 449701 - [Chapter 21] Task_virsh.xml
[Chapter 21] Task_virsh.xml
Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE
Product: Red Hat Enterprise Linux 5
Classification: Red Hat
Component: Virtualization_Guide (Show other bugs)
5.2
All Linux
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Assigned To: Christopher Curran
Don Domingo
http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_...
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Blocks: 449674
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Reported: 2008-06-02 21:41 EDT by Michael Hideo
Modified: 2009-02-23 00:02 EST (History)
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Description Michael Hideo 2008-06-02 21:41:02 EDT
http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_virsh.html

 

Chapter 21. Managing guests with virsh

23.1. virsh the command line interface tool for virtualization

These two sections are doubly documenting the same tool.

 

Bad sentence structure:

“You can make a new guest session from an XML machine definition. If you have a
pre-existing guest that you created previously with the xm tool or the
virt-install command.

 

s/ To terminate, destroy or delete guest use the virsh command with the destroy/
To terminate, destroy or delete guest use the virsh command with destroy/

 

s/ To display the guest list and the current state with virsh/ To display the
guest list and their current state with virsh/

 

Confusing statement, why use “the” CPU? What CPU?

“running domains are currently active on the CPU”

 

“Configuring Memory allocation” and “Configuring max memory” is 2 different
version of the same info- please delete one.
Comment 1 Christopher Curran 2008-06-05 22:31:50 EDT
splitting the chapters now. Deleting the second one after I pull the information
I want from it.

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