Bug 449701 - [Chapter 21] Task_virsh.xml
Summary: [Chapter 21] Task_virsh.xml
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Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE
Alias: None
Product: Red Hat Enterprise Linux 5
Classification: Red Hat
Component: doc-Virtualization_Guide
Version: 5.2
Hardware: All
OS: Linux
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Target Milestone: rc
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Assignee: Christopher Curran
QA Contact: Don Domingo
URL: http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_...
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Blocks: 449674
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Reported: 2008-06-03 01:41 UTC by Michael Hideo
Modified: 2009-02-23 05:02 UTC (History)
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Last Closed: 2009-02-23 05:02:51 UTC
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Description Michael Hideo 2008-06-03 01:41:02 UTC
http://www.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/5.2/html/Virtualization/chap-Virtualization-Managing_guests_with_virsh.html

 

Chapter 21. Managing guests with virsh

23.1. virsh the command line interface tool for virtualization

These two sections are doubly documenting the same tool.

 

Bad sentence structure:

“You can make a new guest session from an XML machine definition. If you have a
pre-existing guest that you created previously with the xm tool or the
virt-install command.

 

s/ To terminate, destroy or delete guest use the virsh command with the destroy/
To terminate, destroy or delete guest use the virsh command with destroy/

 

s/ To display the guest list and the current state with virsh/ To display the
guest list and their current state with virsh/

 

Confusing statement, why use “the” CPU? What CPU?

“running domains are currently active on the CPU”

 

“Configuring Memory allocation” and “Configuring max memory” is 2 different
version of the same info- please delete one.

Comment 1 Christopher Curran 2008-06-06 02:31:50 UTC
splitting the chapters now. Deleting the second one after I pull the information
I want from it.


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