Bug 505883 - Re-order paragraphs for readability
Summary: Re-order paragraphs for readability
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Status: CLOSED NEXTRELEASE
Alias: None
Product: Fedora Documentation
Classification: Fedora
Component: install-guide
Version: devel
Hardware: All
OS: Linux
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Assignee: David Nalley
QA Contact: David Nalley
URL: http://docs.fedoraproject.org/install...
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TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2009-06-14 14:44 UTC by Edwin ten Brink
Modified: 2009-06-18 04:21 UTC (History)
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Last Closed: 2009-06-18 04:21:48 UTC
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Description Edwin ten Brink 2009-06-14 14:44:22 UTC 
Some re-ordering of paragraphs place them more logically in the document when reading front to back.

Paragraph 2.5. "What If I Cannot Download Fedora?" should be paragraph 2.1.3.

Paragraph 2.6. "How Do I Start the Installation Program?" should be the first paragraph of chapter 6.
Comment 1 Ruediger Landmann 2009-06-18 04:21:48 UTC 
Thanks Edwin -- here's what I've done.

I moved section 2.6 as you suggested, but realised that the chapter was now really all about "Obtaining Fedora". 

I therefore re-titled the chapter, and divided it into two sections:
2.1. Downloading Fedora
2.2. Obtaining Fedora on CD or DVD (the old 2.5)

Hopefully this will read more logically.
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