Bug 654187 - Errors in Musician's Guide LilyPond section
Summary: Errors in Musician's Guide LilyPond section
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Status: CLOSED NEXTRELEASE
Alias: None
Product: Fedora Documentation
Classification: Fedora
Component: musicians-guide
Version: devel
Hardware: Unspecified
OS: Unspecified
low
low
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: Christopher Antila
QA Contact: Nobody's working on this, feel free to take it
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TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2010-11-17 04:44 UTC by kalgynirae
Modified: 2011-06-03 05:35 UTC (History)
2 users (show)

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Last Closed: 2011-06-03 05:35:38 UTC
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Draft Correction (3.49 MB, application/pdf)
2011-01-04 01:54 UTC, Christopher Antila
christopher: review+
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Red Hat Bugzilla 665663 0 low CLOSED URLs to all Tutorial Files Are Broken 2021-02-22 00:41:40 UTC

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Description kalgynirae 2010-11-17 04:44:58 UTC
There are a couple of small errors in the LilyPond section of the Musician's Guide.

Section 12.4.7, last example: The explanation following the code example refers to a "violin" section, but in the code the section being referred to is actually called "something".

In the example, the variable "something" should be renamed to "violin" to match with the explanation.


Section 12.4.8.2, second example: The guide states: "The first bar has four half-notes, which is twice as many beats as are allowed. LilyPond will print a warning at the first bar-check symbol."

This is incorrect. The first bar-check will align with the second bar line and thus not produce any warning. The guide's interpretation of the bar-check symbol implies that you would have to put a bar-check at the end of every measure, which is not the case. The example should be modified so that it will actually produce a warning. A good example is "\time 4/4 c4 c2 c | c4 c2 c4 |" (in this hypothetical scenario, the third pitch's duration was mistakenly omitted, causing the bar-checks to fail.)

Comment 1 Christopher Antila 2010-11-19 06:05:38 UTC
I have inspected the document, and see that you're quite right about these errors.  My schedule is full for a few weeks, but I will make changes in December, and post here to let you see an updated version.  The corrections will be released with Fedora 15.

Thank you for your help in improving Fedora's documentation!  We welcome further feedback as a response to this bug.

Comment 2 Christopher Antila 2011-01-04 01:54:50 UTC
Created attachment 471567 [details]
Draft Correction

Please review the attached PDF file. It has a proposed resolution to the problems you reported. Please comment on whether the proposed resolution is acceptable, or you would like further changes.

Comment 3 kalgynirae 2011-01-04 02:17:25 UTC
I have reviewed the appropriate sections of the PDF, and it does indeed correct the errors.


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