Bug 829524 - Docs QE Review: Chapter 10 - 12 typos [9 issues]
Docs QE Review: Chapter 10 - 12 typos [9 issues]
Product: Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6
Classification: Red Hat
Component: doc-Virtualization_Administration_Guide (Show other bugs)
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Assigned To: Laura Novich
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Reported: 2012-06-06 20:57 EDT by Andrew Ross
Modified: 2016-01-26 20:54 EST (History)
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Last Closed: 2012-06-24 02:07:30 EDT
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Description Andrew Ross 2012-06-06 20:57:24 EDT
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10.1. Storage pools
Networked (shared) storage pools -Networked storage pools cover storage devices shared over a network using standard protocols and is required when migrating guest between hosts.
[typo] s/-Networked/- Networked/
[typo] "and is required"?

10.1. Storage pools
used in Infiniband
[typo] s/Infiniband/InfiniBand/ Creating a dedicated disk storage pool using virsh
Step 7.
"# rm ~/guest_images_disk.xml

[typo] Screen has extra blank line after command Creating an LVM-based storage pool with virsh
# lvs
LV      VG          Attr   LSize   Origin Snap%  Move Log Copy%  Convert
[typo] different columns in RHEL6.3:

LV       VG       Attr     LSize   Pool Origin Data%  Move Log Copy%  Convert

12.2. Cloning volumes
arguement which
[typo] en-US s/arguement/argument/

12.3.1. Adding file based storage to a guest
Create an empty container file or using an existing file
[typo] s/using an existing/use an existing/

12.3.1. Adding file based storage to a guest
The following example defines a virtio block device whose source is a file-based storage container named FileName.img": 
[typo] Extra " before colon. s/FileName.img"/FileName.img/

12.3.1. Adding file based storage to a guest
Note, that the virsh attach-disk command also accepts the --persistent option. 
[typo] do we need the comma? (or even note as this is a note admonition)

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Comment 2 Laura Novich 2012-06-11 06:06:17 EDT
4497199 build (docs-rhel-6-candidate, /rpms/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux-Virtualization_Administration_Guide-6-web-en-US:4315f9d4282df4a0e0cfaf04146ab46c1357a855) completed successfully

10.1. Storage pools
http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6/html/Virtualization_Administration_Guide/chap-Virtualization_Administration_Guide-Storage_Concepts.html#sect-Virtualization-Storage_Concepts-Storage_Pools Creating a dedicated disk storage pool using virsh
Step 7.
http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6/html/Virtualization_Administration_Guide/chap-Virtualization_Administration_Guide-Storage_Pools-Storage_Pools.html#sect-Virtualization-Storage_Pools-Creating_Storage_Pools Creating an LVM-based storage pool with virsh

12.2. Cloning volumes

12.3.1. Adding file based storage to a guest]
Comment 3 Andrew Ross 2012-06-18 00:26:41 EDT
(In reply to comment #2)
> 4497199 build (docs-rhel-6-candidate,
> /rpms/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux-Virtualization_Administration_Guide-6-web-en-
> US:4315f9d4282df4a0e0cfaf04146ab46c1357a855) completed successfully
> 10.1. Storage pools
> http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/
> Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6/html/Virtualization_Administration_Guide/chap-
> Virtualization_Administration_Guide-Storage_Concepts.html#sect-
> Virtualization-Storage_Concepts-Storage_Pools
> Creating a dedicated disk storage pool using virsh
> Step 7.
> http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/
> Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6/html/Virtualization_Administration_Guide/chap-
> Virtualization_Administration_Guide-Storage_Pools-Storage_Pools.html#sect-
> Virtualization-Storage_Pools-Creating_Storage_Pools
> Creating an LVM-based storage pool with virsh
> http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/
> Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6/html/Virtualization_Administration_Guide/chap-
> Virtualization_Administration_Guide-Storage_Pools-Storage_Pools.html#sect-
> Virtualization-Storage_Pools-Creating-LVM
> 12.2. Cloning volumes
> http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/
> Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6/html/Virtualization_Administration_Guide/sect-
> Virtualization-Storage_Volumes-Cloning_volumes.html
> 12.3.1. Adding file based storage to a guest]
> http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/
> Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6/html/Virtualization_Administration_Guide/sect-
> Virtualization-Virtualized_block_devices-Adding_storage_devices_to_guests.
> html

Verified: Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux-Virtualization_Administration_Guide-6-web-en-US-0.1-129.el6eng
Comment 5 Laura Novich 2012-06-24 02:07:30 EDT
This fix was incorporated into Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6.3

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