Red Hat Bugzilla – Bug 829524
Docs QE Review: Chapter 10 - 12 typos [9 issues]
Last modified: 2016-01-26 20:54:56 EST
Description of problem: 10.1. Storage pools Networked (shared) storage pools -Networked storage pools cover storage devices shared over a network using standard protocols and is required when migrating guest between hosts. [typo] s/-Networked/- Networked/ [typo] "and is required"? 10.1. Storage pools used in Infiniband [typo] s/Infiniband/InfiniBand/ 11.1.1.1. Creating a dedicated disk storage pool using virsh Step 7. "# rm ~/guest_images_disk.xml " [typo] Screen has extra blank line after command 11.1.4.2. Creating an LVM-based storage pool with virsh # lvs LV VG Attr LSize Origin Snap% Move Log Copy% Convert [typo] different columns in RHEL6.3: LV VG Attr LSize Pool Origin Data% Move Log Copy% Convert 12.2. Cloning volumes arguement which [typo] en-US s/arguement/argument/ 12.3.1. Adding file based storage to a guest Create an empty container file or using an existing file [typo] s/using an existing/use an existing/ 12.3.1. Adding file based storage to a guest The following example defines a virtio block device whose source is a file-based storage container named FileName.img": [typo] Extra " before colon. s/FileName.img"/FileName.img/ 12.3.1. Adding file based storage to a guest Note, that the virsh attach-disk command also accepts the --persistent option. [typo] do we need the comma? (or even note as this is a note admonition) Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable): Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux-Virtualization_Administration_Guide-6-en-US-0.1-109 How reproducible: Steps to Reproduce: 1. 2. 3. Actual results: Expected results: Additional info:
4497199 build (docs-rhel-6-candidate, /rpms/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux-Virtualization_Administration_Guide-6-web-en-US:4315f9d4282df4a0e0cfaf04146ab46c1357a855) completed successfully 10.1. Storage pools http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6/html/Virtualization_Administration_Guide/chap-Virtualization_Administration_Guide-Storage_Concepts.html#sect-Virtualization-Storage_Concepts-Storage_Pools 11.1.1.1. Creating a dedicated disk storage pool using virsh Step 7. http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6/html/Virtualization_Administration_Guide/chap-Virtualization_Administration_Guide-Storage_Pools-Storage_Pools.html#sect-Virtualization-Storage_Pools-Creating_Storage_Pools 11.1.4.2. Creating an LVM-based storage pool with virsh http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6/html/Virtualization_Administration_Guide/chap-Virtualization_Administration_Guide-Storage_Pools-Storage_Pools.html#sect-Virtualization-Storage_Pools-Creating-LVM 12.2. Cloning volumes http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6/html/Virtualization_Administration_Guide/sect-Virtualization-Storage_Volumes-Cloning_volumes.html 12.3.1. Adding file based storage to a guest] http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6/html/Virtualization_Administration_Guide/sect-Virtualization-Virtualized_block_devices-Adding_storage_devices_to_guests.html
(In reply to comment #2) > 4497199 build (docs-rhel-6-candidate, > /rpms/Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux-Virtualization_Administration_Guide-6-web-en- > US:4315f9d4282df4a0e0cfaf04146ab46c1357a855) completed successfully > > > > 10.1. Storage pools > http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/ > Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6/html/Virtualization_Administration_Guide/chap- > Virtualization_Administration_Guide-Storage_Concepts.html#sect- > Virtualization-Storage_Concepts-Storage_Pools > > > 11.1.1.1. Creating a dedicated disk storage pool using virsh > Step 7. > http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/ > Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6/html/Virtualization_Administration_Guide/chap- > Virtualization_Administration_Guide-Storage_Pools-Storage_Pools.html#sect- > Virtualization-Storage_Pools-Creating_Storage_Pools > > 11.1.4.2. Creating an LVM-based storage pool with virsh > http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/ > Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6/html/Virtualization_Administration_Guide/chap- > Virtualization_Administration_Guide-Storage_Pools-Storage_Pools.html#sect- > Virtualization-Storage_Pools-Creating-LVM > > > > 12.2. Cloning volumes > http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/ > Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6/html/Virtualization_Administration_Guide/sect- > Virtualization-Storage_Volumes-Cloning_volumes.html > > 12.3.1. Adding file based storage to a guest] > http://documentation-stage.bne.redhat.com/docs/en-US/ > Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux/6/html/Virtualization_Administration_Guide/sect- > Virtualization-Virtualized_block_devices-Adding_storage_devices_to_guests. > html Verified: Red_Hat_Enterprise_Linux-Virtualization_Administration_Guide-6-web-en-US-0.1-129.el6eng
This fix was incorporated into Red Hat Enterprise Linux 6.3