Bug 872940 - Typos and broken links in F18 beta Release Notes
Summary: Typos and broken links in F18 beta Release Notes
Keywords:
Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE
Alias: None
Product: Fedora Documentation
Classification: Fedora
Component: release-notes
Version: devel
Hardware: Unspecified
OS: Unspecified
unspecified
unspecified
Target Milestone: ---
Assignee: Release Notes Tracker
QA Contact: Pete Travis
URL:
Whiteboard:
Depends On:
Blocks:
TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2012-11-04 13:47 UTC by Yuri Chornoivan
Modified: 2013-01-15 20:37 UTC (History)
6 users (show)

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Doc Type: Bug Fix
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Last Closed: 2013-01-15 20:37:57 UTC
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Attachments (Terms of Use)
Patch to fix typos (3.82 KB, application/octet-stream)
2012-11-04 13:47 UTC, Yuri Chornoivan
no flags Details
Additional patch to fix the typos in new sections (4.77 KB, patch)
2012-11-21 16:23 UTC, Yuri Chornoivan
no flags Details | Diff
Patch to fix new typos (4.04 KB, patch)
2013-01-14 06:15 UTC, Yuri Chornoivan
no flags Details | Diff

Description Yuri Chornoivan 2012-11-04 13:47:26 UTC
Created attachment 638011 [details]
Patch to fix typos

Description of problem: There some problems due to conversion in the current Release Notes


Version-Release number of selected component (if applicable): git/master, git/f18


How reproducible: always


Steps to Reproduce: open XMl files of the docs from the patch attached
  
Actual results: Some broken links due to the period at the end of sentences, sqlite broken into "sqlit" and "e", orphaned parenthesis


Expected results: Typo-free docs.


Additional info: Thanks for fixing these issues.

Comment 1 Ben Cotton 2012-11-04 15:05:11 UTC
Fixed, thanks!

Comment 2 Pete Travis 2012-11-04 16:32:02 UTC
Good fix, thanks Yuri and Ben. I've pushed the fixes out for translation, perhaps redundantly, and they will be reflected in the final document.

Comment 3 TianShixiong 2012-11-15 13:47:12 UTC
There is another one in Web Servers section.
That is:

The Apache <package>httpd</package> package has been upgraded to version 2.4.3-1, which contains numerous security and peformance fixes.

"Peformance" should be performance.

Comment 4 Ben Cotton 2012-11-15 14:52:24 UTC
Fixed in master, thanks!

Comment 5 Yuri Chornoivan 2012-11-21 16:23:51 UTC
Created attachment 649298 [details]
Additional patch to fix the typos in new sections

Some more new typos:

depricated
seperate
informatino
thier

Comment 6 TianShixiong 2012-12-02 03:45:34 UTC
In Desktop section,
<emphasis></emphasis>:<productname>KDE-Edu</productname>

I think that should be <emphasis><productname>KDE-Edu</productname></emphasis>:

Please fix.

Comment 7 Pete Travis 2012-12-02 04:03:17 UTC
Fixed. I found a similar issue in the Sugar section of the same resource and corrected.

Comment 8 Yuri Chornoivan 2012-12-04 17:01:57 UTC
Hi!

Am I right that the second patch with fixes for the following typos

depricated
seperate
informatino
thier

will never be applied?

Comment 9 Pete Travis 2013-01-01 23:48:35 UTC
I've applied the patch, thanks Yuri.

Comment 10 Donald Edward Winslow 2013-01-13 14:48:02 UTC
In the section on fedup, directly under the note that says the examples below use sudo, the first command reads "yum install fedup". This should say "sudo yum install fedup".

Comment 11 Ben Cotton 2013-01-14 03:44:52 UTC
Donald,

Thanks for pointing this out. The docs style guide (https://fedoraproject.org/wiki/Docs_Project_Style_Guide_-_Fedora_Specific#Administration_Tools) prohibits the use of sudo, so I've changed commands to use su -c.

Comment 12 Yuri Chornoivan 2013-01-14 06:15:33 UTC
Created attachment 678025 [details]
Patch to fix new typos

A patch to fix some new typos:

deskop enviromnents -> desktop environments
upgrade.The -> upgrade. The
thrid -> third
3.1 For -> 3.1. For

Thanks for fixing these typos.

Comment 13 Donald Edward Winslow 2013-01-14 21:29:18 UTC
(In reply to comment #12)
> Created attachment 678025 [details]
> Patch to fix new typos
> 
> A patch to fix some new typos:
> 
> deskop enviromnents -> desktop environments
> upgrade.The -> upgrade. The
> thrid -> third
> 3.1 For -> 3.1. For
> 
> Thanks for fixing these typos.

In the last section on fedup (2.2.5.7), "rebuild" needs to be changed to "rebuilt".

Comment 14 Ben Cotton 2013-01-15 20:37:57 UTC
Yuri and Donald, your fixes have been applied.


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