Just read the draft version 18.2.2 and would like to offer the following corrections for consideration: Preface: Section 1.1 Replace: Key combinations can be distinguished from keycaps by the hyphen connecting each part With: Key combinations can be distinguished from keycaps by the plus sign (+) connecting each part Chapter 1: Perhaps an explanation of what UEFI stands for would be useful in the introduction? Chapter 1: Section 1.1 Replace: We can be certain that no unsigned executable code is present until the initial ramdisk (initrd) is loaded With: Secure Boot ensures that no unsigned executable code is present until the initial ramdisk (initrd) is loaded Chapter 1: Section 1.2 Replace: In Fedora if you use Secure Boot, what modules the kernel loads can be restricted, but user space malware cannot. With: Secure Boot in Fedora allows you to restrict modules loaded by the kernel: but it does not allow you to control malware loaded in user space. Chapter 2: Section 2.1 Replace: The solution to use the Microsoft signing service was one of simplicity With: The option to use the Microsoft signing service was provided for simplicity Chapter 2: Section 2.2 Typo: Thie blacklist is a file Correction: The blacklist is a file Replace: Microsoft will provide this list to Fedora Project With: Microsoft will provide this list to the Fedora Project Replace: Microsoft has stated that the blacklist is to be used to prevent binaries being used for attacks from executing. With: Microsoft has stated that the blacklist is to be used to prevent binaries being used to execute attacks. Replace: We are working to limit the impacts of this With: We are working to limit the impact of this Chapter 2: Section 2.3 Replace: In future iterations of Secure Boot support the above may also be possible With: In future iterations of Secure Boot support for the above may also be possible regards Dave R