Title: 3.7.1 パッチングの仕組み Describe the issue: 1. "Asynchronous updates (非同期更新)" sounds like a technical term of programming. -- 非同期更新: 既存製品の通常のアップグレードサイクル以外にリリースされる 1 回限りのパッチです。 -- 2. A typo, dropping "S" for SELinux. -- 欠陥の影響を低減する他の要素はあるか (ファイアウォール、ecurity-Enhanced Linux、コンパイラー指示文など)。 -- Suggestions for improvement: 1. "Occasional updates (随時の更新)" or something like that. 2. "... Security-Enhanced Linux ..." Additional information:
One more on the same line of 2. 3. "compiler directives (コンパイラー指示文)" "コンパイラーディレクティブ" is more natural.
I checked the Installation Guide here and don't see a missing "S" in "Security-Enhanced Linux": https://access.redhat.com/site/documentation/en-US/JBoss_Enterprise_Application_Platform/6.1/html-single/Installation_Guide/index.html Are you referring to the translated version?
Yes. I've been asked to review the Japanese translation and it's here: http://docbuilder.usersys.redhat.com/ja/6895/#About_Patching_Mechanisms