Red Hat Bugzilla – Bug 995959
Sentence is missing an "a"
Last modified: 2014-08-20 21:39:31 EDT
Document URL: https://access.redhat.com/site/documentation/en-US/JBoss_Enterprise_Application_Platform/6.1/html-single/Administration_and_Configuration_Guide/index.html#Domain_Controller
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Describe the issue: The following sentence needs an "a" added between "is" and "JBoss".
"A Domain Controller is JBoss EAP server instance that acts as a central management point for a domain."
Suggestions for improvement:
The following errors also need to be corrected:
1.8. About Host Controller (Topic ID: 36)
A host controller is launched, when the script domain.sh or domain.bat script is run on a host.
Feedback: The comma contained in this sentence needs to be removed.
2.2.1. Start and Stop Servers (Topic ID: 4748)
You can start and stop servers with the Management CLI or the Management Console.
If you are running a Standalone Server instance, you can shut the server down with the shutdown operation in the Management CLI. There is no specific equivalent in the Management Console, as you are free to use your **filesystem** to shut down the running instance.
Feedback: How would you use the filesystem to shut down a running instance? This needs to be fact-checked.
Changes for the first issue and that in section numbers 1.8 have been corrected. Changes for section 2.2.1 will require further work.
Closing, as I'm pretty sure this has been fixed in other documentation efforts.