Bug 995959 - Sentence is missing an "a"
Summary: Sentence is missing an "a"
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Status: CLOSED CURRENTRELEASE
Alias: None
Product: JBoss Enterprise Application Platform 6
Classification: JBoss
Component: Documentation
Version: 6.1.0
Hardware: Unspecified
OS: Unspecified
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Assignee: eap-docs
QA Contact: Russell Dickenson
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Blocks:
TreeView+ depends on / blocked
 
Reported: 2013-08-12 05:00 UTC by Russell Dickenson
Modified: 2014-08-21 01:39 UTC (History)
3 users (show)

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Last Closed: 2014-08-21 01:39:31 UTC
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Description Russell Dickenson 2013-08-12 05:00:21 UTC
Document URL: https://access.redhat.com/site/documentation/en-US/JBoss_Enterprise_Application_Platform/6.1/html-single/Administration_and_Configuration_Guide/index.html#Domain_Controller

Section Number and Name: 


Describe the issue: The following sentence needs an "a" added between "is" and "JBoss".

"A Domain Controller is JBoss EAP server instance that acts as a central management point for a domain."

Suggestions for improvement: 

Additional information:

Comment 1 Russell Dickenson 2013-08-12 05:05:52 UTC
The following errors also need to be corrected:

1.8. About Host Controller (Topic ID: 36)
A host controller is launched, when the script domain.sh or domain.bat script is run on a host.

Feedback: The comma contained in this sentence needs to be removed.

2.2.1. Start and Stop Servers (Topic ID: 4748)
You can start and stop servers with the Management CLI or the Management Console.
If you are running a Standalone Server instance, you can shut the server down with the shutdown operation in the Management CLI. There is no specific equivalent in the Management Console, as you are free to use your **filesystem** to shut down the running instance.

Feedback: How would you use the filesystem to shut down a running instance? This needs to be fact-checked.

Comment 2 Russell Dickenson 2013-08-12 05:41:42 UTC
Changes for the first issue and that in section numbers 1.8 have been corrected. Changes for section 2.2.1 will require further work.

Comment 6 Lucas Costi 2014-08-21 01:39:31 UTC
Closing, as I'm pretty sure this has been fixed in other documentation efforts.


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