Filing a bug for a user who emailed me directly; this didn't seem to be a situation requiring verification with the bug reporter, and today I'll just feed him fish instead of teaching how-to. "in section 17.2.1, it should say "/dev/sda", not "/dev/hda". It hasn't been /dev/hda for a while. I had to reinstall the boot loader today and the stated command gave /dev/hda: Not found or not a block device."
I just got your email after asking on fedora-list and then filing my own bug #504874. Since mine is about 4 minutes earlier, I guess this should be marked as a dupe? I did try to find contact info on the Documentation site, but couldn't and finally got a direct link from fedora-list: http://www.redhat.com/archives/fedora-list/2009-June/msg00811.html Also filed another bug #504876 regarding the direct link page.
Ha! That's funny. Sure, I'll close this as a dupe; it's best if you are the reporter, anyway. Good point about the contact information. One way is via the Feedback chapter in a specific guide, but that just tells you to file a bug report. It would be a good idea to have a general how-to-contact-Fedora Docs method. *** This bug has been marked as a duplicate of bug 504874 ***