Section Number and Name: Procedure 4.2. Running PackStack Interactively, step 13e Describe the issue: Enter the list of IP address on which you want Quantum DHCP set up. Suggestions for improvement: s/address/addresses
Generalising this bug to add more corrections for section 4.2: 0.) Replace "the packstack utility" (with packstack in bold) with just PackStack in ordinary paragraph text where we are not referring to the command or the package specifically. 1.) Section 4.2 1st para: s/Deploy OpenStack by running the .../OpenStack can be deployed by running the... 2.) Procedure 4.2 step 1 s/Run/Running 3.) Procedure 4.2 step 2 s/Configuring Public Key/Configuring a Public Key 4.) Example 4.3 Using the Default Red Hat Enterprise Linux NTP Servers screen prompt should not be bold. 5.) Procedure 4.2 step 6 screen prompt should not be bold. 6.) Procedure 4.2 step 7b s/and the answer file/and in the answer file 7.) Procedure 4.2 step 12a & b screen prompts should not be bold. 8.) Procedure 4.2 step 14b screen prompt should not be bold. 9.) Procedure 4.2 step 15e replace the second ext4 (in bold) with Ext4 as in prev sentence (not bold). 10.) Procedure 4.2 step 16c screen prompt should not be bold.
Fixed comment 0 Fixed comment 2, point 0. Also replaced <command>packstack</command> where applicable in Chapter 3 "Installing PackStack", in Chapter 4 "Running PackStack", and in 4.3 "Running PackStack Non-interactively." Fixed comment 2 points 1 to 10.
Note re comment 2, addition of Configuring OpenStack Networking as step 13 means points 8,9,10 in comment 2 now refer to steps 15b, 16e and 17c respectively.